Ailce

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Name Alice powerhouse

Gender: Female

Age: 30

Meister: none

Weapon Form: a charkama

Love Interest: she's a player she goes after what ever girl she sees

Appearance: the same as her twin sister Alex is tall around 5'11 pale white usually wears black makeup nail puslsh and tight black outfits that shows off her beast parts the outfit is a black leather full body duit

Personality: flirty and lustful the possite of her twin Alex who is shy and revered also unlike her sister Alice likes to drink and chase down women unlike her younger by 4 minutes sister Alex Alice has a sense of humor she also likes to use her body to get what she wants she also likes to wear tight leather outfits that show off her curves

History: Alice was form a young age good looking and when she became a teen ager will lets just say she got even better and when she became a woman forget about it now she is a good looking weapon looking for her dream partner she has never had a partner because all the girls she is after are to scared to say yes she has been at the academy since she was 15 the outfit and the makeup are to help her better with getting herself a partner

Miscellaneous: (Additional information of any importance that does not belong to any other category can be placed here)

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Just 2 things.... One, what do you mean it "shows off her best parts"? I assume you mean it's tight around her breasts and butt, but considering some of the stuff I've seen from your bios, I just need to make sure you're not saying she's walking around with her bare 'parts' hanging out....

Other than that, the only thing that needs work is the History. The only thing it really establishes is that she's attractive and looking for the right partner, so more information needs to be given. Like has she had any partners before? When did she join the DWMA? And is there any reason for the outfit and makeup, or is it just something to get attention?

Guest

nothing shows its normal a full body outfit i'll explain more

Guest

Ok. So to be 100% honest, this bio really isn't that great, but it's good enough to get through. Her weapon for is kind-of intresting and the black makeup and outfit could look cool, but it's kind-of left up to the imagination a bit. IDK how it would really help, but at least there's some self-justification about it being... different....

Accepted!