IDK if you're still around, Cake, but your character looks finished as far as I can tell (sorry no one noticed yet, but it still says WiP, so it's hard to know for sure). She seems like a decent character, I like that she has phobias to be used as weaknesses, even though she, honestly, isn't too intresting as an actual character as far as personallity goes. The history is definatly good, providing her with starting goals, motivations, and a decent mystery to expand on later on.
The only thing that I have a problem with is that I believe a user named Koa used the same image for her own character a while back while she was still active and the appearence could be a bit more detailed. It's not something I'll hold the character back for, but you might want to consider another pic and appearence.... Please post when you want the character to be accepted.