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PostSubject: Red Asune "Weapon" (WIP)   Red Asune "Weapon" (WIP) I_icon_minitimeJuly 20th 2014, 8:03 pm

• Asune;Red;Weapon
Name: Red Asune
Nickname: Red
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Race: Weapon
Position: Student
Class: One Star
Partner: None
• A strong body

Appearance: “Ah, Red a young beautiful girl. Marvelous red eyes, slightly tanned skin oh so tall. Ah Red, such a beautiful girl, small lips, thick hips, small chest but she does not mind. Wearing a tanish dress with black assets draped around her. Stunning red eyes she’s unaware of this beauty, but instead thinks of herself as a beast.
Tall and Lovely is what they say, until the masquerade drifts away , same pretty girl small and fair, same girl with the blonde hair , blood red eyes and she’s changed ready to fight whatever comes her way, Red’s here to save the day with a thin black cloak and her dress to shreds accompanied by her best friend Death leggings ripped upon her thighs she stands there mesmerized something takes over when she goes into fight every soul upon leaves in fright. Same pretty girl small and fair but this time she’s just lying there.. (heh)
Height: 5’6
Weight: 90-105 lbs
Fighting style: Red describes her fighting style as “bloody and ruthless” Obviously she can have quite the temper, when conflict comes about she’s quick and stealthy, she keeps her eyes on her opponent but quickly strategizes her attacks. She knows when to back off, but usually just goes for it. Loves a good fight.
Personality: Red is a midviolent misunderstood 15 year old girl. She can be angered easily for she has quite the temper. She rarely trusts anyone and just about never talks. But of course Ms.Asune is *ahem* Bipolar. No worries its just a mild case, so on whichever mood you get her in that’s how she’ll be. Happy and somewhat cheerful she’s the chatter box, touchy feely, and bubbly. However, When Red is depressed, sad, and feeling alone she dosent talk, writes in her notebook and sticks to training, schoolwork, and music. Interacting with people, Red can be quite rude, depending on who you are. She can “Read” people almost instantly when she meets them. She hates the phrase “you cant judge a book by its cover” because in some cases, you can. Mostly Red is a respectful young girl to adults and people she meets, but she dosent meet people purposely, she believes she is nothing but bad luck.
• Inside the soul

Weapon form: In full weapon form Red is a black scythe draped in gold at her blade and her handle.

Partial form: Since Red hasn’t ever had a meister she’s almost always in weapon form. Partial she has two black and gold blades sticking from her forearms (one on each arm) and her eyes turn completely black.

Abilities: Red in full weapon form has 2 special abilities, one being called “Scythe of the Reaper” in which she turns into a 3 bladed black scythe, and the second one being called “Dos cara” when she simply becomes a double sided scythe.

Resonances: N/A

• Out of your mind

Strengths: Prepared at times, Strategizes, Adaptable

Weaknesses: Ahead of herself (as in she thinks she can win almost every fight, aka bigheaded) , Being talked down on (lowers confidence and might lower fighting quality) ,  can be sometimes stubborn

Likes: Drawing, poetry, music, training, school, violence, loyalty, respect, percerverance

Dislikes: Rude people, instigators

Asperations: Red one day wishes to be a 3 star weapon, have a meister for as long as she lives, she wishes to become a death scythe also, make friends and control herself.

Extra Notes: None
• Behind the strings

Alias: Autumn

Other characters: None

Face Claim: Uh.. no?

Rp sample: She tripped on the concrete soaking wet from the cold rain and looked back quickly to see that she’s being followed by a mysterious figure, trusting no-one, Red already knew this could be bad~ “Crap” she screeched while getting back up running quickly to the next town. Hurt from her previous battle she did not want to fight, trying her hardest to resist going partially scythe she ran into the glowing town of death city. Scared and unknowing she jumps on a bunch of crates and with her flexibility she climbed on top of the roof of the building hiding behind an electrical box. Tired and panting she lays her head in her hands trying to carry on.

Later that night creeping through the  dark streets Red searches for a stable place to rest for the night, then she decided she’ll be on her way. Looking down dark alley ways and peaking into peoples apartments she makes her mind up. “this is hopeless, no sleep tonight.” Lying down in one of the alley ways hiding herself as best as she could the restless Red wipes her tears and gazes up at the stars.
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PostSubject: Re: Red Asune "Weapon" (WIP)   Red Asune "Weapon" (WIP) I_icon_minitimeJuly 20th 2014, 8:28 pm

Well, it's definatly got a good ammount of detail. Honestly, while I usually keep from giving more detailed thoughts on the bio as a whole until the end, I have to say that I like the appearence being super poetic and the RPing sample. The appearence works mainly because the bio mentions poetry as an intrest and I do kind-of like being able to know how she handles IC.... I don't think anyone else has really ever done either of those things so far on the site before.

But more importaintly, there's two things that need to be changed a bit. First, we've kind-of had a big thing about multiple weapon forms because people were using them as an excuse to have a better weapon in the past even though it's suppost to be specific to Tsubaki's family. So while you're not quite doing that, you should probably just say "Scythe of the Reaper" and "Dos Cara" are low leveled resonances to kind-of avoid the issue.

And the second thing, you need to answear wether you've read the rules or not. If you look through the rules, you'll probably see why it's importaint.
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