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| Subject: mah book! January 22nd 2015, 2:05 pm | |
| i have a book I've been working on before i had even joined this site about crusher's and ryu's true origin and i had finally finished the first one, right now i am trying to think of the second book for it but currently in writers block. i will leave a preview in a spoiler down below and you can even critique if you want and if you have any ideas for book #2 then feel free to post and when it's finish i will even put your username in the book to give some credit to you. so please enjoy - mah book:
DIMENSIONAL FIGHTERS BY:Crusher There is legend of a boy whose origin is human but was raised by sacred elemental dragons. Once the boy got to the age of sixteen he started a new life of adventure in a area where time and space has not formed known as the center dimension there are portals that lead to new worlds and one's we know. The boys story begins in that center dimension. CHAPTER 1 A NEW WORLD in the central dimension: “YEAAAAAAAAH! FINALLY FINISHED THE DIMENSIONAL FIGHTERS HQ! HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!” said the boy. “now all I need to do is to find some recruits. Hmm. Maybe I'll enter one of the dimensions.”as the boy was contemplating he didn't realize he was on the edge of the platform holding the castle like head quarters. “but which o-” as he was about to finish his sentence he fell off the platform and started hurtling towards his first adventure. Meanwhile, in the dimension the boy is hurtling towards. “HUFF HUFF! Gotta get these plans back to the resistance hideout.” as the mysterious being whispered to itself another being yelled. “GET HER! SHE IS THE LEADER OF THE RESISTANCE! “yelled the captain of the beings. “CRAP! I have to hide.” as she said that she climbs up into the nearest tree with ease. “WHERE'D SHE GO! FIND HER THIS INSTANT!” yelled the captain. “YES SIR!”yelled the underlings in unison to their captain. Just as the underlings where about to search a bright flash of light erupted from the sky and a object crashed to the ground causing a medium sized crater after. “WHAT WAS THAT! TEAM B YOU STAY HERE AND LOOK FOR LANARA THE NAGA! TEAM A YOU COME WITH ME TO INVESTIGATE THAT CRASH!” “YES SIR!” as the two teams split up lanara thinks to herself. “what was that? I better follow team a from the tree tops.” meanwhile in the boys perspective. “ugh. I'm gonna feel that in the morning. Hmm. Wonder where I am?” as the boy get's up rubbing his head team a finally reaches the crater. “YOU DOWN THERE! WHO ARE YOU!” yelled the captain. “hmm? WHOA! A BUTTERFLY! HA HA HA HA HA HA!”suddenly the boy starts chasing the butterfly not noticing the captains yell. “IDIOT! DON'T IGNORE ME! ATTACK THE CHILD MY SHADOW ELF SOLDIERS!” as the captain gave the command the soldiers started to charge at the boy swords drawn and ready to kill when suddenly a flash of green went by them making the first three soldiers fall. “WHAT?!” yelled the captain in shock.”hm? Who are you? Asked the boy still oblivious to the soldiers and their captain. “I am lanara the naga, I am the leader of the resistance! So don't worry I will protect yo-”as she looks over to the boy lanara notices that he is trying to catch the butterfly again.”PAY ATTENTION YOU IDIOT! THESE SHADOW ELVES WILL KILL YOU! AUGH!” suddenly the boy looks over at lanara and notices that she has a cut on her arm. “hey miss let me take care of these weirdos.” “UH?! ARE YOU CRAZY! THEY ARE TRAINED WARRIORS AND WILL STOP A-” suddenly lanara gets a chill down her spine. “wha-wha-what is this feeling?” as she looks around she notices the boy has a different look in his eyes. Then she finally notices his features. A child of around ten years of age with black hair and red highlights around the edge of his hair, his hair forms one spike on his right side and three little spikes on his left and his eyes are as blue as the sky. “so are you the one's who hurt this lady?” as the boy asks the question to the soldiers and their leader he gives off an ominous aura. “WH-WH-WHO ARE YOU!?” as the leader of the soldiers yells out the question the boy suddenly appears in front of the captain looking at him with eyes of pure rage. “WHAT?! WHEN!” as the leader looks at his soldiers his fear grows even more when he sees his men falling one by one with only the white of their eyes showing. “Y-Y-Y-YOUR A MONSTER!” as the captain closed his eyes and yelled that he drew his sword and swung the blade towards the boys head but the blade is suddenly stopped. As the captain opens his eyes he is shocked to see the boy stopped the blade with his teeth clenched on the blades flat surface.”H-H-How d-d-d-d-did you d-d-d-d-do that!?”as the captain asked with fear in his voice the boy clenched his teeth harder and broke the blade sending shards falling to the ground and spiting out the shards in his mouth.”i drink my milk and I've had practice.”suddenly the boy punches the captain in the face sending him flying in to the air.”UH?! The chilling sensation is gone.” as lanara says that the boy suddenly falls to the ground fast asleep. “he's.... asleep? HE'S ASLEEP!? Well he did take out an entire team of shadow elves and their captain. I think i'll bring him back to the hideout.” as lanara goes over to the boy she picks him up and carries him on her back but she doesn't notice the shadow elf stalking her in the shadows. CHAPTER 2 VAMPIRE FIGHTER “where is she? She's late.”said a tall thin being with pointy ears. “maybe she was spotted and she had to abort the mission.”implied a small scruffy looking being, “WILL YOU TWO SHUT UP! My sis will come back with the shadow elves next plan of attack. Just you see.” suddenly a figure appears from the forest, “HA HA HA HA! TOLD YOU TWO MY SIS WOULD BE FINE! NOW WHERE'S MY GOLD YOU OWE ME!” yelled the brother of lanara. “wait what is she carrying?”said the thin being. As the three beings looked to see what lanara was carrying a shock went through their body as to the sight of what was running up behind her. “LANARA LOOK OUT!” yelled the gruff looking being, as lanara turned her head to the shock of the yell the shadow elf drew his blade in a crazed yell “DIE RESISTANCE SCUM!” as the shadow elf jumped to stab lanara in the back the boys arm suddenly lifts up pointing at the shadow elf. “SHADOW SPEAR!”as the boy yells the attack a spear shoots straight up from the shadow elf's shadow, after piercing the evil elf the spear returns to being the dead elf's shadow once again. “WHA! WHAT DID THAT BOY JUST DO?!” yelled the three beings in unison shocked at the sight they had just seen. Inside the hideout. “WHAT ARE YOU THINKING! DID YOU SEE WHAT THAT CHILD DID!” yelled the tall thin being. “I'M THE LEADER OF THE RESISTANCE! SO I THOUGHT IT WOULD BE SMART TO BRING HIM HERE AND HE HELPED ME THALOS!” lanara yelled to thalos. “ZZZZZZZZZZZZ.no mr.broccoli don't take my cheeseburger.ZZZZZZZ.” as the boy was talking in his sleep the other four beings suddenly realized the boy was standing in the door way. “UH! HEY YOU GET BACK IN THERE! Yelled thalos. “Now now thalos if lanara brought him for saving her then we should be polite to him. Don't you agree slithor?” asked the small scruffy being. “YEAH! Not only that WHERE IS THE GOLD THAT YOU TWO OWE ME! WELL THALOS,GOX! WHERE IS IT!”yelled slithor. “IMPORTANT IMPORTANT! Sorry to interrupt the story but here's the who's who in the story so far. The tall thin being with the pointy ears is thalos. The small scruffy being is Gox and lanara's brother is slithor. Now back to the story! BEEEEEEEEEP!” “uhhhhhhhh. What just happened?”asked thalos. “no idea but either way we still have no idea who the child is or what species he is.” said Gox. “I say we make him tell us who he i-” suddenly the boy punches thalos in the face sending him hurtling through the wall of the base. “take that mr. broccoli. That'll teach you to take my cheeseburger. ZZZZZZZZZ.”suddenly the boy starts to wake up and looks over at thalos. “what happened to him?” asked the boy “YOU DID THAT YOU MORON!” yelled gox lanara and slithor in unison. “hmmm. Oh I guess your right. WHOOPS! HA HA HA HA HA HA!” said the boy. “uh. Just who are you child.”asked lanara. “hmm. AH that's right my name's crusher and i'm sixteen years old.” answered the boy. “SIXTEEN! YOU LOOK LIKE YOUR AROUND THE AGE OF TEN!”yelled lanara. “and what of your species crusher?” asked gox “i”m a human.”as crusher answered gox, lanara, and slithor all got a shocked look on their face. “Your a human? I thought the only humans that existed where under the control of vampires.”said gox pondering to himself. “well it was nice meeting all of you but I gotta look for some recruits. So BYE!” after saying that crusher takes out a hover board jumps on and flies out the window of the room they were all in. “HEY WAIT!” yelled slithor. “save your breath brother. I have a feeling that we'll meet crusher again.” said lanara. Back at the dimensional fighters HQ. “*YAAAAAAAWN* ugh. How long was I asleep?”as the mysterious person get's up a little robot rushes up to the person. “MISTRESS RYU! WE HAVE A MAJOR PROBLEM!”yelled the little robot “AUGH! That was in my ear airi. Now calm down and tell me what's going on.” said ryu in a monotone voice. “I-I-IT'S TERRIBLE! CRUSHER IS MISSING!” cried the little robot. “WHAT?! Ugh that moron. I bet he fell off the platform. Airi play all the security footage around when crusher finished the HQ.” ryu commanded to the little robot. “YES MAM!”suddenly footage of crusher showed up on a giant screen and ryu watched what happened to crusher and which portal he went into. “that moron. Now I know where he went and knowing him he's gonna get into trouble. *sigh* why did those stupid elemental dragons give me the trouble of keeping him out of trouble. Better get going. Airi you start sending transmissions to beings in other dimensions and tell them to get ready to join a fight for their lives. GOT THAT!” as ryu finished her command the little robot replied. “YOU GOT IT MISTRESS RYU! And don't forget if you go back to your old ways crusher's gonna get mad.” as the little robot finished its sentence ryu grumbles and jumps out of her window to the dimension crusher was in. back in the dimension crusher is in. “ah. This fresh air feels nice. To bad I don't know how to land a hover board HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!” suddenly crusher crashes into a forest near a village. “man that was not my best landing. I wonder if there's a shop where I can get supplies?” after a few minutes of walking crusher finally makes it to the village. “hmmmm. Something isn't right here. Where are all the people?” suddenly a villager peeks out through the window and beckons the boy to get into the house. In the villager's house“are you crazy child! What where you thinking!”said the villager to crusher. “what's going on here? And why are you so pale mister?” as soon as crusher asked that a commotion started happening in the streets of the village. “hm? Hey? What's with those guys picking on that little girl?” after crusher asked that the villager's body started to tremble with fear. “those are Hod's vampire guards. It's to late for the girl boy.”suddenly the villager notices crusher is outside and hears the boy yelling. “OI! LEAVE THAT LITTLE GIRL ALONE!” after crusher says that the three vampires look up to see crusher.”eh. Whot's whid de kid?” as the lead vampire finished his sentence the other vampire asked in a crazed voice. “CAN I EAT HIS BLOOD CAPTAIN?! CAN I CAN I HUUUUUUH?!” after the captain shock his head in approval the crazed vampire lunged towards crusher but as soon as the vampire got close to crusher it slowed down, stopped and fell to the ground with foam coming from it's mouth. “WHOT?!” screamed the captain. After the captain yelled another vampire but this time with a calm and soothing voice began to speak. “child. Might I come over to see my comrade?” after that crusher nods a yes to the vampire. As the vampire walks over to the unconscious vampire he talks to the boy. “oh. My name is gerard, my captains name is tork, and the crazy one that fainted is craz.” as gerard finally got to craz a shock came to gerard. As he turned over craz he saw twenty fist marks on the fainted vampire. “WHAT?! But you where staying still the whole time. Who are you?” after that crusher began to speak in a dark menacing tone. “little girl. You may wanna leave here.” after saying that the little girl runs into one of the houses as the boy commanded. “now. My name is crusher and I will stop hod's tyranny over this village.” after that tork chuckled and then broke into an all out laugh. “HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA! YOU! BEAT MASTER HOD! HA HA HA HA HA HA HA! THAT'S RICH! AND ARE YOU GOING TO DO IT BY YOURSELF?! HA HA HA HA HA! “suddenly crusher points his head up to the sky and starts to answer torks question. “no cause I have a friend coming in three,two,one.”after that a burst of light appeared from the sky and a figure with large wings and a tail appeared and was headed straight for the village. “WHOT IS DAT?!” as the captain yelled that the figure of a thin eight foot tall woman with jet black hair going down her back and golden yellow eyes that could pierce through pitch darkness gently landed on the ground using her enourmous wings. After she landed she turned to crusher and started to hit him in the head. “YOU IDIOT I TOLD YOU YOU'D FALL OFF THE PLATFORM IF YOU DIDN'T WATCH WHERE YOU WERE GOING!”said ryu “OW OW OW RYU STOP IT! OWWWWWW!”as the two where fighting the vampires couldn't make out what was going on when suddenly the fainted vampire came to. “ugh. My guts hurt.” after that remark gerard told craz what had happened after that they began whispering and turned to tork. “okay. Let's just kill em and get it over wid. Hm? Why are you two suddenly looking at me like dat?”as the captain asked that gerard and craz attacked the captain and killed him and after that they looked at crusher and ryu and saw they where done fighting. “crusher we would like to join you in your fight against hod.” answered gerard. “hm? But weren't you trying to get that little girl earlier?” after crusher asked that craz started to talk like a normal person. “yeah but we where actually gonna get her help once we got her to the castle. We where gonna swap her for a dummy and then strike hod while he would try to feast on the dummy.” “hmmmm. OH! I got it!”suddenly crusher runs over to the two vampires and starts whispering into their ears and after he finishes telling them his plan crusher looks over at ryu with a devilish grin. CHAPTER 3 THE PLAN UNFOLDS back at the resistances hq. There is a meeting going on with the members. As everyone is chatting lanara suddenly comes out and the chatter starts to stop. “OKAY TROOPS! WE GOT WORD FROM TWO OF OUR INFORMANTS THAT HOD IS ABOUT TO FEED! OUR INFORMANTS TELL US THAT THERE ARE TWO OTHER'S TO THE PLAN AND ARE WILLING TO HELP ON THE DEFEAT OF HOD!” after lanara said that all the beings in the room cheered in happiness and excitement at the news. “TONIGHT WE WILL RAID THE VAMPIRE'S AND GAIN A NEW ADVANTAGE ON THE SHADOW ELF KING'S ARMY AND REGAIN OUR WORLD!” suddenly the beings start shouting louder in applause to lanara's motivational speech. Back at the vampire's castle. Ryu starts to mutter under her breath. “ugh crusher once this is over i'm gonna beat you to a pulp.” after saying that ryu remembers back to crusher talking about how ryu will be the bait cause her skin is harder than diamonds. After hods teeth break from trying to get ryu's blood gerard and craz would strike and crusher would then do a frontal assault. As ryu finishes her flash back a small boy with a hooded cloak comes up to her and says “it's time for master hod to feast” after that the boy starts to lead ryu down a long hall but her head just barely touches the arched ceiling. Suddenly a huge door appears in front of the two. As the boy pushes the door it starts to open with a loud creaking moan letting the two know how old the door really is. After entering the room through the door the two find themselves in a new room twenty times the size of the hall. Both the boy and ryu knew they were in the monsters den. After walking a few minutes the two come to a throne with a tall muscular man with long grey hair and eyes so cold they could freeze what ever he saw. As he sat on his throne he spoke in a dark yet gentleman like tone. “welcome to my home young lady. And might I ask what the name of my meal is?” after saying that ryu suddenly get's shivers down her spine. She starts to think to herself. “why am I getting shivers?! The last time I got shivers was when I was given to crusher.” after that she answers the man's questions in a blank yet polite voice. “my name is kage ryu. But others call me ryu. Might I ask who you are?” once she finished speaking hod suddenly appears in front of ryu looking at her eye to eye which shocked ryu. She thought he was around five six feet tops, not the exact same height as her. Suddenly he lifts his hand and gently feels ryu's cheeks and he starts to speak “my name is hod and just to let you know. This plan of yours won't work.” suddenly ryu's eyes open with shock and without warning she wrapped the vampire in her tail and flung him across the throne room with great ease. After hod skidded across the floor he got up and brushed off the dirt on his suit but suddenly the boy with the hood jumped up and round house kicked hod in the head sending the vampire through the throne room wall. After crashing through the wall hod sat straight up with a look of rage on his face and looked to the boy with the hood and yells to him. WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU! I AM YOUR MASTER AND YOU DARE DO THAT!” after hod finished his sentence the boy suddenly removes the cloak to reveal crusher. “CRUSHER?! I THOUGHT YOU WHERE GONNA STRIKE FROM THE SHADOWS!” after ryu yelled that gerard and craz came from their hiding spots. After that Gerard began to ask. “WHAT HAPPENED?! WHY DID YOU BREAK FROM THE PLAN!” after Gerard finished yelling crusher began to explain himself. “i knew something was off when I first got into this room. The reason I broke from the plan is that he was giving off an aura that equals mine when I go into my shadow form. And he knew what the plan was when he looked at ryu.” after explaining crusher suddenly starts to draw in shadows from his surrounding. As the three vampires look in shock at the boy the shadows start to envelope his body making him pure black. His eyes and hair turn pure red and red claws form at his finger tips. After seeing that ryu rushes over to the two vampires yelling “TAKE COVER!” As the three take cover Gerard begins to ask. “What is this shadow from?! And why do we need to take cover!” after asking ryu tells the two vampires crusher's story. “well I don't know much but crusher was raised by a group of dragons that harness the sacred elements as their own. The dragons took crusher and raised him from a small child. They taught him their ways and how to harness those powers. And so he got special forms that increase his powers depending on the forms he uses. But there is one from that is truly fearsome. And you never want to ever see.” after that the two vampires swallow in amazement at crusher's feats. As the three look from behind the throne they see that the newly shadowed crusher is looking up at hod who had just gotten unstuck from the wall. As hod looks at crusher trying to read his face crusher begins to speak in a shadowy voice. “it's no use trying to read my face. The shadows give me cover. Think of me as a ninja. And once I move all you'll see is red. Literally.” after saying that crusher's starts to move and only the color of red is visible but cause of the speed hod cannot pin point crusher's location. Suddenly hod is kicked in the back of his head and sent flying through the giant stained glass behind his throne and crusher follows not to far behind. At the edge of the village the resistance member's gather and ready to attack the vampire guards around the village. Lanara starts to whisper to the soldiers. “okay the plan of attack is to sneak up to the guards from the roofs and then attack them. the-”suddenly lanara is cut short by a heavy boom. Lanara look over to the commotion to see hod on the ground in a crater with a shadowed figure holding him down by the neck. After the vampire guards reestablish themselves from the shock they charge the shadowed figure only to be sent flying backwards by the wave of it's hand. Then the shadowed figure tosses hod seventy miles into the air and after doing that the shadows recede to reveal crusher to the resistance army hiding in the forest and then he starts to run up the castle wall with ease. After witnessing that gox begins to speak with terror in his voice. “D-D-D-DID YOU SEE THAT?! THE BOY HAD HOD ON THE GROUND BY HIS THROAT!” after that they continue to watch the fight breathless to what they where witnessing. Up in the air hod finally regains consciousness and turns in the air to see crusher running up after him. “SO YOU CAN TRANFORM! WELL SO CAN I!” after that hod starts to transfrom into a thirty foot bat with the wing span of an entire village. “LETS SEE IF YOU CAN BEAT ME NOW!” suddenly crusher jumps and rockets past hod at an alarming speed. After going twenty more miles gravity starts to take effect on crusher and pulls him back to the ground. As this is happening crusher puts both his hands together and starts to yell. “I WON”T LET YOU RULE OVER THIS VILLAGE ANY MORE! TAKE THIS! DRAGON METEOR DRILL!” and with that crusher starts to spin and air starts to form around him then suddenly the air takes the form of a dragon and triples it decent speed hitting hod. After that the two fighters plummet to the ground at 4G's and once they get to the ground a huge cloud of dust and earth erupt from under both the warriors impact. CHAPTER 4 [center]THE FIGHT ENDS/center] As the cloud starts to clear the entourage begin to see a shadowy figure begin to stand. As the bystanders squint to see who the victor is they open their eyes in shock. In the cloud hod is standing with his face pointing towards the sky his eyes in a blank state and mouth open”*gasp*........a.....*gasp*...a....*gasp*....a human......*gasp*......nearly beat me?.....*gasp*.......need.....*gasp*....blood.” suddenly the little girl from before runs out after a ball she accidentally rolled out of a hole crying out in a little squeaky voice. “MY BALL!” after hearing that hod's head turns towards the little girl in reply “BLOOD! *gasp* NEED BLOOD!” after that hod starts to rush after the little girl in a flurry that not even crusher's party and the resistance members had a chance to respond to. As the little girl looks up to see hod's face a shadow suddenly get's in front of the girl and replies. “heh. I'm surprised you managed to withstand the impact of the attack.” as everyone realizes what happened they see crusher in front of the little girl his right hand holding onto hods lower jaw and his left hand holding hods upper jaw, as hod is trying to bite down he begins to speak. “HOH?! HOH AWE YA AVLE TA KEET FIGHDIN?!” “SORRY TO INTERRUPT HERE BUT AIRI IS GONNA TRANSLATE WHAT HOD JUST SAID! He said HOW!? HOW ARE YOU ABLE TO KEEP FIGHTING?! And that is what hod said. BYE!” after airi's explanation crusher begins to speak. “so hod let's see how far I can send you? DRAGON'S FURY!”once crusher said that he begins to punch hod repeatedly with great force in his chest area. “AND NOW DRAGON UPPERCUT!” crusher then performs a powerful uppercut which sends hod flying off into the distance. As the group watch hod disappear into the sky the resistance army let's out a sudden scream of happiness and cheer and lanara begins to shout. “VAMPIRE CASTLE IS OURS!” and with that all the villagers along with gerard and craz begin to celebrate their victory. Later that night. Crusher is in one of the villagers houses in a deep sleep with ryu standing guard out side of the small hut. Lanara comes up to ryu and begins to talk with the dragoness. “so why are you standing guard here?” ryu then begins to answer the naga. “cause I'm not the partying type.” after she answered that ryu notices the little girl running off into the forest. “excuse me but I have some important business to attend to.” after saying that ryu unfolds her wings and jets up into the air leaving a small vortex of dust where she stood. “jeez. I wonder what's got her in a bad mood? But if she was standing guard here and to leave it must have been important. I think I'll stand guard for her.” as lanara stood in front of the small hut ryu was following the little girl from the air. Suddenly the little girl stops in a clearing with a small pond so ryu immediately takes shelter in a nearby tree, due to ryu being a dragon she is able to listen and see what the little girl is doing while hiding in the shadows. Suddenly a figure appears in the pond but even with ryus eyes she can't tell what the figure is. Suddenly the little girls figure changes into a thin five foot tall woman with dark tan skin and short blonde hair. She also has a slim tail and wings like ryu. The girl then begins to speak. “the boy has skill. Able to defeat hod and even taking damage from his own attack. But there was something strange about him.” the dark figure begins to question the girl in a dark and menacing voice. “Oh? And how is it strange?” “when the boy got in front of me in my disguise his eyes where being covered by the shadow of his hair yet they glowed a dark red and he was smiling.”replied the girl. “RED EYES!? Could it be? Could it be that the boy is the legendary red eyed dragon?” after hearing that ryu begins to think to herself. “how does that thing know crusher's nickname?” ryu then go's back to listening on the two's conversation. “Lane. I want you to follow the boy and see if he is the red eyed dragon. And if he is. KILL HIM!” with that ryu silently flies back to the village with this new information that she decides to keep to herself.
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