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PostSubject: Achima Ravencraft The Monster Revamped   April 7th 2016, 5:21 am



Name: Achima Ravencraft

Gender/Sex: Female

Age: 16 (October 29)

Love Interest: None

Orientation (Sexual/Romantic): Asexual

Weapon: None

Appearance: Achima has a constantly changing and fluctuating appearance that never stops changing due to the fact that she's a mix and matched pile of multiple creatures and electronics. As time progresses, her appearance will continue to change according to the people she absorbs and electronics she takes. Well, they do say you are what you eat. What will be written down now is her current appearance.

Achima currently looks like a young teen with a skinny and slender build, allowing her to be incredibly flexible. She stands at a height of 5'4 feet tall and weighs around 216 pounds due to all of the compressed biomass. After absorbing a white fox, she gained short, messy, fluffy, and white hair and fox like features like pointed ears and a bushy white tail. Achima has pale skin yet she possesses unusually lively rosy red dots on her cheeks. She has yellow eyes but lost her left eye. She managed to reattach it by inserting it into the socket of a robot head that was surgically merged to her body. She had one of her hands amputated but she has multiple tendrils stemming from her stub of a hand.

Achima wears a pink, white, and black dress like outfit. She also has two large bows made of red silk. She wears one on the side of her head and one on the front of her chest. Finally she wears pink boots with a fluffy rim near the top of the boots.

Revamped Appearance

Achima has settled upon a final and definite appearance that she will always revert back to if she ever shapeshifts. This form no longer possesses any electronics, Achima ditched all of these to take on a more organic form. Oddly enough however, she still has the potential of being hacked despite ditching all of her electronics. The reason behind this(if any), is still unknown to this very day.

Achima now stands at mere 5'7 feet tall while weighing in at around 156 pounds. She possesses a healthy looking build, being flat-chested with an average Caucasian skin tone. Examining her skin closely though, may reveal that she possesses grey veins. Whenever she blushes, instead of blushing pink or red, her face becomes flushed a light grey. Achima now also possesses freckles on her cheeks, as well as straight black hair. Achima also happens to be capable of forming a second mouth on her belly, right above her navel. This mouth is filled with legitimate shark teeth that are serrated and sharp.

Personality: Achima is a pale shadow of the girl she originally was before The Organization kidnapped her and forced her to endure years and years of cruel and unusual experiments. These experiments ripped her psyche into pieces, forcing her to gather up and salvage anything that she could use to create a new personality. She would usually have to substitute some parts with memories of organisms she absorbed. The final results gave birth to Achima the world knows today.

She managed to her German accent but she will speak mostly in English due to it being somewhat 'easier' for her use her current state. Sounds that should be W will be pronounced as V; We:Vee. Th turn into Z; Think:Zink. S sounds will include the S but will always be followed by Ch; Store:Schtore. V sounds become F; Give:Gife. Ing in Anything will become Ink; Anything:Anythink. Commands will usually include a unnecessary You with some verbs being followed by En. Hey, go jump off a cliff:Hey, YOU go jumpen off a cliff! (This will help decode her dialogue for anyone who can't understand it right off the bat.)

Achima can easily be labeled as mentally and emotional unstable. Certain things can set her emotions aflame in many different ways. A simple insult will lead to her becoming enraged but it will send her into a murderous frenzy unlike others who would just brush it off. Compliments will make her embarrassed but she will usually tend to repay the comment by flirting with that certain individual. Betrayal will make her sad but it will possibly also send her into a deep depression, causing her to sob in a remote location where no one may find her. She'll remain this way possibly for multiple days.

It has been proven that she will give personas to inanimate objects like the robot head attached to her. She never gave it a name yet but she will chat with it from time to time, usually planning complex things with it. She'll make it communicate with with her by having it nod its head in approval or shake it in refusal. Her schemes tend to only be ways to kill or devour others but this due to self-defense. She'll never purposely kill anyone without receiving or gaining anything from it. She may be a murderer but she isn't a mindless animal.

Achima has never had a friend before... At least a friend that she can remember now as her barely human self. Friendship is strange and alien to her but she finds it very interesting and is curious about making relationships. She desires them but she will always find it challenging to find someone who doesn't get scared away by her disturbing appearance. This left Achima very lonely but she will always hide it under the forced guise of a cheerful expression.

Revamped Personality

Achima can now speak in an American accent and she'll usually opt to using this accent for others to better understand her. This doesn't mean that she completely lost it however, she's actually quite capable of switching into it. She'll use her accent whenever she feels like.

Achima has grown more intelligent since she left the Organization. This is due to the fact that she has accumulated a vast fountain of knowledge through the memories of her victims. This however, has lead to her also developing a severe case of schizophrenia. She constantly claims that she can hear the voices of many individuals constantly judging her and even ordering her kill herself. There are two other voices however. Whenever one of these voices speaks to Achima, all of the other voices become silent. The owner of this voice also appears to Achima, an apparition that no one else other than Achima and a possible resonating Weapon can see.

One of these apparitions is Fircy, a Weapon that Achima had consumed in the past. Fircy tends to tempt Achima to fall deep into a mad rage of anger. She claims that the only way to relieve this rage is by taking it out on others weaker than her. Then, there is the apparition of Krystal, a Kishin Egg she consumed along with Ashley Gravelyen. She constantly trys to pull Achima into a powerful urge for bloodlust. The only way to get this bloodlust to subside, is through killing others in outrageously painful manners.

Unlike the two apparitions however, Achima is very indifferent about everything. She has no qualms for killing but she doesn't possess a desire for it. She kills for one reason, to gain power. She wishes to obtain power because an all new terror has been born in her heart. This fear, is that of death. She is terrified of the prospect of dying and will go about any means necessary to obtain power to protect herself from all of the possible dangers of the world.

History: Achima was an ordinary girl who was brought up in Germany with a very caring family with five brothers and sisters who are all older than her. She was always very shy however and wasn't very good at making friends in Germany. She would usually just stick around her brothers and sisters that always treated her nicely. As she grew up however, each of her siblings would slowly move away to have better and nicer lives of their own. This slowly left her being all alone with the exception of her parents. They grew too old to do much with her though so it really didn't matter.

Eventually she would get the chance to take part in a student exchange program which she would normally decline if it weren't for the fact that she would be spending her time at her older brother's home. He lived in America so she needed to learn how to speak English before she left. It took tons of practice and dedication but she learned the language of English, albeit the fact of speaking it with a very thick German accent. With this achievement under her belt, she off to visit her brother. She would be very nervous on the flight, the fear of crashing to her death was permanently in her head but true terror would occur when she finally landed.

She would search for her brother after the plane landed safely but he would be nowhere to be found. Achima would avoid all the crowds that passed her by and would travel outside the airport to get away from all of the strange people she was currently seeing. She would then find herself a bench to sit upon in the dark streets of America before awaiting her brother who she believed would eventually find her. As time ticked by, Achima would find herself growing sleeper and sleeper with each blink she took. After blinking one last time, she would awake surrounded by blinding lights.

She passed out on that bench and was kidnapped without even knowing so. Achima was left in a padded room with bright lights that were all directed towards her. Video cameras also filled the room and allowed her tormentors to watch her every move 24/7. Achima couldn't understand what was happening to her so she would scream and shout, begging to be let out by anyone who would lead an ear. No one would release her and she would sit herself in a corner to cry and sob. She would sit in this little white room for what felt like centuries, having no one to interact with or talk to. She was growing desperate to talk with anyone that could listen.

It was then that she was finally visited by a woman in a lab coat and guards with rifles. Achima would beg for them to let her go, sobbing as she did so but they would only beat her to the ground before tranquilizing her to put her under. They would then take her body and make many modifications before running multiple tests. The days would pass by just like this, modifications after modifications. Achima would eventually gain an extra robotic head that grew out of her back and new Black Blood that traveled thru her veins.

The changes slowly damaged and altered her fractured psyche, slowly changing the way she felt about the world. It didn't help that her kidnappers began to give her high doses of mind altering drugs. This slowly broke her down and made her more willing to participate in experiments that included killing. She would proceed to combat creatures that would normally outmatch a simple child such as herself. She would rip them all apart with Black Blood tendrils before adding them to her own body, further altering her form.

She passed every experiment The Organization attempted on her and she became a Perfect killer for her tormentors. She would no longer remain locked up under bars for much longer however, so she devised a plan to finally escape. She would destroy all the lights and cameras within her containment cell, leaving herself alone in pitch black darkness. She would have an element of surprise before her tormentors returned to her cell to retrieve her for further experimentation.

The Organization would send in elite soldiers to investigate the sudden disturbance in the electronics. The very moment they opened the door, they were bombarded by multiple tendrils made of Black Blood. Achima ripped each of them limb from limb, spraying blood all over the halls outside her cell. After these individuals were murdered, they were shoved into a tooth filled mouth on the girl's stomach. Their flesh and bones would be crushed and torn into smaller pieces as the mouth chewed. She would give a small burp before proceeding to make her way through the facility.

She killed anyone near her in a similar manner, no one in the facility was safe from the monster they had created. Every guard, scientist, and researcher was killed in the facility on a single night. Once the girl found the exit into the outside world, a unfamiliar light fell upon her blood soaked face. The air she breathed in was fresh... Clean. Nothing like the air within her prison down below. She was finally free, released into a world she barely even remembered. She had no idea what to do now with the exception of two primitive and simplistic actions, "Valk... And... Feed."

Revamped History

Quite a lot occurred after Achima left the Organization. She went on multiple murderous sprees, consuming enough souls to completely master her Black Blood abilities. It was shortly after that she was found by Zera and become one of her bonds. In exchange for more power, Achima became a follower of Zera's following her to a city Zera has closed off from the rest of the outside world. It was here that she would soon meet Drake and consume Ashley Gravelyen and Krystal Lockhart. (Currently doing a thread with Arc where Achima will consume the two.) It wasn't much long afterwards that she began to abandon all of her electronics in favor of taking full advantage of a biological fighting style.

Abilities:

Achima's Original Abilities
AbilitiesDescription# of souls  contributed to  the ability
Complex Black BloodShe is capable of using black blood to create weapons, shields, tendrils, and useable limbs. She is also capable of generating large quantities of the substance. Her ability to manipulate the substance will increase as she consumes people. (Currently at 90, Maximum being 90) She has unlocked all her black blood abilities. In addition to her original black blood abilities, she has gained a variation of Mad Blood dubbed Reverse Mad Blood. With this ability, she is capable of creating a flood of her blood capable of flooding a city block alone. Her blood can dissolve only organic matter. Also, her blood can absorb all the madness of an individual in a 100 foot raidus. This would blast any clown away from this raidus. If they try to force themselves inside, they shall feel pain and eventually become absorbed by the blood. Achima will feel very nauseous and will be incredibly slow and weak while in this state. After bringing in her blood, she will absorb all dissolved individuals, suffer the madness of the absorbed madnesses, and be out of her weakened nauseous state.90/90
AbsorptionShe is capable of using black blood tendrils to rip people apart and add them to her body. She will gain their abilities, memories, their form that she can easily morph into(Can't copy their soul.), their souls that will merge with her, their biomass, and even their voices. She is also capable of taking electronics to add to her body.N/A
Electronics Are NiceAchima is able to permanently power and use electronics that she has absorbed. She can use cameras to extend her range of vision.N/A
Pull Yourself TogetherAchima can pull any piece of herself back to her main body. She can't use cut off pieces of flesh or limbs until she touches it to have it join with her again. Absorbing people can allow her to gain new limbs and organs.N/A

Abilities Gained Through Assimilating Fircy Kadrin
Partial weapon materialization:
 
Ambrosia:
 
Ambrosia High:
 
Ichor's Rebuke:
 

Zera is capable of fusing with Achima but her appearance will hardly change at all. Instead, her black blood will become pink in color but still function like regular black blood. Their fusion gives Achima access to Zera's Candy Powers and enhanced endurance, strength, and speed.

Abilities Gained through Consuming Ashley Gravelyen

Achima can use Bone Marrow but she currently can't use any magic. She must consume ten souls to learn how to use Ashley Gravelyen's magic.

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SpellsDescription
Soul ProtectAchima can disguise her hideously disgusting soul as an Innocent Soul.
Bone MarrowThis is more of a natural ability than a spell. Achima can control her bones and form them in any way possible. She can force bones out of her body by having them protrude out of her flesh. These bones are about as tough as steel. Achima has incredible endurance, capable of withstanding the pain of ripping these bones from her body.
Fire BallsAchima can breathe fireballs from the mouth on her stomach. After firing one, she must wait for 15 of her own posts before using another one.

Abilities Obtained through Consuming Krystal Lockhart

AbilitiesDescription# of souls  contributed to  the ability
Soul FireAchima can light things on fire by shooting purple flames from her hands. These flames are regular flames but anyone killed with these flames will have their soul immediately absorbed by Achima0/50
Crystal ManifestationAchima can create black crystalline structures she can levitate. These structures are as tough as steel and glow with a purple hue. She can only create these crystals within a 5 meter radius of herself.0/100
Crystallizing LightingAchima can fire purple lighting at inorganic matter, turning it into more crystals.0/100
StretchAchima can stretch out her limbs and her body in some what unbelievable manners.0/50
ShiftAchima can shift her form from a solid, to a gas, a liquid, ect. She can't attack however while in a liquid or gaseous state.Can be unlocked only after stretch 0/100
Destruction BeamAchima can shoot Wavelength laser beams from her hands that can drill through hardened Black Blood.0/100
Black Blood clothesAchima can create soft, elastic like fabric from her black blood. This basically just gives her clothes she can have without ever worrying about being nude.0/10
The Madness of FearAchima can throw out a Madness Wavelength across the world, causing anyone she wishes to fear her. The particular individual will still have the ability to choose to either fight, run, or even become completely paralyzed at the sight of her on their own.Upon Graduation to a Kishin

Weaknesses: Loud radio static can cause her amazing amounts of pain. It can eventually kill her if exposed to it for too long. Magnets can turn off any electronics she currently possesses. The more people she consumes, the more schizophrenic she becomes. This will lead her to become more erratic from time to time. She is capable of being hacked, this will turn her into a obedient slave. She will not kill herself and will fight anyone who attempts to harm her, she will kill others if she is ordered to however. There will be a system update that will require thirty of her own posts to fully complete. Once this is done, she will no longer be a slave and will possess a new set of coding so her hacker can't hack into her the same way they did the first time.

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PostSubject: Re: Achima Ravencraft The Monster Revamped   April 10th 2016, 8:43 pm

1. You never received approval for this version of the character before trying to use her.

2. Zombies are a no-no, especially without user approval if it involves OC's.

3. Portals are a complete and total no, period.

4. Most of those abilities weren't even on Krystal's sheet, whom you never listed as deceased.

5. All Beast abilities are denied.

6. She would not have a powerful enough wavelength to create clowns, let alone that many. Nerf the number down, please.

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PostSubject: Re: Achima Ravencraft The Monster Revamped   April 10th 2016, 10:31 pm

Thank you Overlord Lani for reviewing my app, I really appreciate it.

1. Understood.

2-3. Got rid of the whole zombies and portals thingy. Added soul protect though.

4. I've put in one ability and another another that's sort of a fusion of two of her abilities. I totally broke the coding Crystalizing Lightning, can you please help me fix it?

5. All of them are officially scraped.

6. Got rid of all clowns and gave her a laser beam. Pew! Pew! Pew!
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PostSubject: Re: Achima Ravencraft The Monster Revamped   April 10th 2016, 10:37 pm

Almost forgot, edited Ashley's and Krystal's apps as deceased.
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PostSubject: Re: Achima Ravencraft The Monster Revamped   April 12th 2016, 1:01 am

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PostSubject: Re: Achima Ravencraft The Monster Revamped   April 12th 2016, 5:18 pm

Just fixed the coding. Thanks Grey, I really appreciate it.
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PostSubject: Re: Achima Ravencraft The Monster Revamped   April 20th 2016, 4:50 pm

Okay, so you are in the clear on most of the sections. However, the biggest issues lay in her abilities.

Back to those gained from Krystal... I still don't see how she gained any of them from that character, but you said that the coding was messed up? What do you need?

Please add onto the fire ball description, as it can't just be an automatic weapon type of deal and has the potential for abuse.

We'll start here.

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PostSubject: Re: Achima Ravencraft The Monster Revamped   April 20th 2016, 5:22 pm

The coding was fixed and two of the abilities came directly from the abilities she already had souls in. One of those abilities also got mixed up with another that didn't have any souls in them.

These two abilities are Crystal Manifestation and Crystalizing Lightning

Since most of Krystal's abilities didn't have souls in them, thus having not been developed yet, I decided to rework use Krystal as a catalyst for Achima to gain more souls and unlock new abilities.

I'll edit the fireball so it can only be fired from the mouth on Achima's stomach.
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PostSubject: Re: Achima Ravencraft The Monster Revamped   April 22nd 2016, 10:35 am

Add a limit to the number of fireballs that she can make per thread (or per every... lets say fifteen posts). I would like to see both Crystal abilities nerfed a little bit more, if you could?

As a reminder --- you must notify an admin whenever you have Achima in a thread, as we have to keep an eye on it.

Also, I tallied up the number of souls required for her abilities, and you still have 10 left that could be used, should she reach Kishin status.

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PostSubject: Re: Achima Ravencraft The Monster Revamped   April 22nd 2016, 10:46 am

Sure thing. I'll limit it to 15 posts. I'll make the crystal as tough as steel and only capable of manifesting within a 5 meter radius. The crystallizing lightning will only changes inorganic matter into crystal.

I'll use the ten souls to make a skin tight suit made of black blood that can not be deactivated by any sort of attack from enemies. It won't be as tough as Black Blood, it'll just keep her from going in the nude after she literally rips her body apart... And by extension... Her clothes.
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PostSubject: Re: Achima Ravencraft The Monster Revamped   April 22nd 2016, 10:59 am

Edits have been made.
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PostSubject: Re: Achima Ravencraft The Monster Revamped   April 22nd 2016, 11:09 am

Achima is hereby accepted under the condition that all threads she is in and all edits made to her sheet are immediately brought to the attention of an admin.

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PostSubject: Re: Achima Ravencraft The Monster Revamped   September 5th 2016, 10:39 pm

Dropping and giving to Flair.
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