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PostSubject: Grayson Creed Finished   Grayson Creed Finished I_icon_minitimeDecember 29th 2017, 1:12 am

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Name (Surname, Forename)

Gender/Sex: Male (Sorcerer)

Age: 224

Weapon: Regular Katana

Animal Form: Snake

Mantra:Slithery, Hiss Hiss

Magic: Summoning, Soul Manipulation

Love Interest:

Orientation (Sexual/Romantic): Straight

Appearance: Grayson is a young and lean male. He has golden eyes, short white hair and pale skin interspersed with scales. Additionally,Grayson always has at least one of his snakes with him.
Previously, when he travels with friends Grayson dresses in high boots and a high-collared jacket with baggy sleeves that are long enough to cover his hands. He wears a striped black-and-white shirt under his jacket; it is cinched at the waist and neck, with two belts in each location. When venturing somewhere considerably far, he would slip a solid-colored cape over his jacket and shirt.


Personality: Grayson like most sorcerers considers himself of superior intellect, however, even amongst the sorcerers his intelligence is considered unnatural. Highly praised as a prodigy that only appears once every blue moon(god those are getting more and more common), he quickly rose to become respected magic user amongst his friends. Rumour has it that he intends to lead the Age of the Sorcerer into a bloody war that would enslave the world. But of course, that is a mere rumour(or is it). Grayson is also noted to be quite the master manipulator, being more sly than a margay/conman hybrid, and more charming than a lovesick poet. Although a callous and brutal fighter, Grayson's style is quite tactful. However, he does have a bad tendency to toy with his opponents, even in dangerous situations. Despite his nature, Grayson does share a special bond with most of his friends and associates, having a nurture over nature stance in regards to them. This bond, however, has not stopped Grayson from manipulating them in order to serve his ulterior motives. It is also noted that Grayson is quite the prankster, although some of his pranks often lead to massive fights and disagreements(as most people hate snakes), such as the time he controlled a snake to slither into a friends bowl of cereal without looking which lead to the later developing a deep seeded phobia. Overall, Grayson's personality is quite the contrast to his outwards appearance, where he appears to be peaceful and innocent but is truly a savage beast.

History: Born to a witch and sorcerer, Grayson prides himself in being a pure-blood unlike some of his peers back home. Grayson always knew this and brought it up frequently, even before he began his actual practice of magic. A child known for creating mischief and able to manipulate others to do what he wants along with slither his way out of trouble. Power, strength, and control. Grayson looks up to The Great Sorcerer. His interest leads him to seek power, by researching more into the mystic arts, and becoming ruthless as his time as a child went on.


He became quite known, his name famous all through his youth, yet at the same time, his infamy spread as well. Grayson was ruthless, having murdered weapons and meisters for their practicing his people being hunted as an adolescent. This of course, grabbed the attention of the Death whom he had been hoping to gain an audience with for so long. It didn't take long for the Death to nearly end his existence but Grayson would have a guardian angel whom he to this day believes was the Grand Sorcerer. He from that moment on transformed into the more ruthless and manipulative person that he is now. The confrontation with Death earned Meisters and Weapons more time to live in his eyes as he gains more power to challenge Death and end the era of Weapon and Meister. Still young, Grayson knows there is still much waiting outside the realm of witches. A greater world, people who don't know witches, nor what they could do. Together with the witches of his home, they would wreak havoc on the DWMA.


Within a mere century, it had been told that there was an odd situation in the DWMA. An organization had been formed, different from the ones of old. These guys were quite something and as such, Grayson went to look into it. This would mean the death of more witches after all. So without any issues, Grayson made his way into the human world to send a message to weapons and meisters as he would once again slaughter weapons and meisters. After fishing for some information, he would receive an anonymous message warning him that he was not yet ready to challenge Death again. The big boss behind matters, his father. A man of mystery, yet he seemed to be quite strong. Together, they would ravage the world under the protection of a barrier spell.


Following his father he begged him to teach him the same magic that he knows heavily revolving around snakes. With haste, his father commented on Graysons similarities with snakes even as a child and that his mother would be the key to him becoming as powerful if not more powerful than even the Grand Sorcerer. Nonetheless, several matters were discussed before deciding to part ways once more and find out more about the magical uprising. Grayson made his way back to the witches realm, where a larger amount of people had met, including members of elder witches. Things went well, and alliances were made. Grayson would then return to his mother who was considered a powerful, however passive witch Grayson entertained her with the idea of a battle between the Meisters and Witches. It would lead to her giving her son a book of spell  as she tells him that even though he wants to learn his fathers style he must find his own way in becoming stronger. Their plans ravaged on, as others fought as well,all fueled by the hatred of Meister made the victory come with greater ease. Grayson on the other hand, was outmatched at the end, having seen the more powerful Witches and Sorcerers out there, he survived barely, through his ability to manipulate and tempt others. Now having slightly withdrawn from the Witch Realm, Grayson kept quiet, in order to raise his name once more. He would find this power, and definitely emerge victorious this time against Death.




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Abilities & Equipment

Strengths:
-Master Manipulator. Grayson is quit capable of manipulating most people into doing what he wants.


-Quick Thinker. Grayson is able to think of counters be it verbal or physical faster than most.


-Silver Tongue. Grayson is able to talk his way out of many confrontations and troubles.


-Calm Minded. Grayson is able to keep cool under the most harsh of circumstances.


Weaknesses:
-Pride. Usually not knowing when to admit he’s outmatched Grayson has survived this far purely off luck.


-Close Combat. Preferring to keep his distance and control a fight Grayson absolutely hates close combat.


-Relaxed. His nonchalant nature makes it easier for him to be caught off guard than he would like to admit.


-Fragile. Never really being hurt before Grayson is a rather fragile person. Usually using his snakes as meat shields.





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PostSubject: Re: Grayson Creed Finished   Grayson Creed Finished I_icon_minitimeJanuary 15th 2018, 9:11 pm

Alright, I'm going to break this down bit by bit so that there are no issues later on:

1. Formatting needs some correcting (only a little; for example, strengths/weaknesses feel too spread out). This is more of a minor, detail-oriented thing.
2. His spells/abilities need more explanation. Summoning, in general, is understandable but leaves questions. What can he summon? What are the limits and requirements? What is meant by Soul Manipulation?
3. Appearance is slightly short of words and needs to be fixed on formatting, a bit.
4. You're not allowed to reference canon characters in such a way; remove Lord Death from his history. You may mention the DWMA having a bounty on him, but not the Shinigami himself.
5. His Snake spellset, whatever it is, comes from his familiar/animal form; his father could not have taught him such without also being a snake sorcerer, himself, which you did not mention.
6. You've made it out like he's part of a huge network of sorcerers/witches going at all-out war with the Academy and there's no precedence for that in site-canon, at all. If he's part of any such group, it would be more of an "underground" organization.
7. You talk constantly about how he can manipulate people, but make little to no attempt to show how he does so, other than mentioning a silver tongue. Does he just convince people, and if so, how?
8. You in no way have the correct rule answer. This alone nullifies this character from being accepted, at this time. Correct the answer to have any chance of approval.
9. This is not an Enchanter, it's a Sorcerer. There's a difference.
10. You need a full grammar run-through; you have run-on sentences, improper or missing punctuation and spacing, and just general poor grammar and formatting in a lot of areas.
11. Animal Forms are considered descriptor sections and require a minimum of 100 words. You have exactly one.

While, yes, you are supposed to wait a week before making a tier two character (Clowns, Monsters, Enchanters, Witches/Sorcerers, and Meister Teachers), the fact that you remained totally inactive between the initial making of this sheet/your account and now nullifies your wait. We acknowledge that you have tried to cheat the system and are unimpressed. As a result, a new addition/stipulation to the "Character Creation and Count Limits" rule has been added. This character is On Hold until the requested changes have been made and you have properly spent a week on your account.
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