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PostSubject: Amal Gamma   May 1st 2018, 2:28 pm

post deleted due to improper posting(my bad)


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PostSubject: Re: Amal Gamma   May 1st 2018, 2:41 pm

Alright, you had the lovely pleasure of drawing me for your sheet's grading purposes. You have been warned: I have very picky, and this message will be very long.

First: You did not put this sheet in the proper location. It goes in weapon creation. If you had read the rules, you would know that the Inactive Weapons section is specifically for weapons whose owner's accounts are no longer present on-site.

Second: Your formatting is off. The headlines for each section belong in bold, not the content.

Third: You were given absolutely no permission to make this character an experiment, which destroys his age and history sections.

Fourth: Multiple weapon forms ARE NOT ALLOWED.

Fifth: Appearance section is way too short.

Sixth: You desperately need a grammar run-through.

Seventh: Giovani Aldini was a real person and his age in no way would line up with the timeline of the site.

Eighth: Anti-magic wavelengths are not original or SERP canon.

Ninth: Where in the world does he have 9 souls from? There is nothing in his history that would explain this.

Tenth: Not only did you not answer the rules question, you entirely removed it.

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PostSubject: Re: Amal Gamma   May 1st 2018, 3:23 pm

You realize the red name means I'm an admin, right? Meaning you just undermined my authority by asking another admin permission to do the things I told you were rulebreaking? Additionally, do not send a character sheet to someone's PM without them asking for it.

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PostSubject: Re: Amal Gamma   May 3rd 2018, 10:30 pm

To any admin. what do exorcist fall under, just an occupation or are they grouped together with witches and other such magic useres?
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