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| Subject: Superbia April 17th 2014, 6:19 pm | |
| Name: Superbia Victoria Gender: Male Weapon: Superbia prefers to fight with the above sword, but his cloak, made up of his own dark soul power, is also a weapon. He likes to use it to smother enemies. History:Superbia was once a simple boy born in a stately manor in Northern England. His parents were better off than most, and the boy rarely wanted for anything, save an adventure. The kind one would read in a story, about the hero who would go out from his home, leave his family, fulfill a quest or goal, and return, hailed as a hero. The pride of his parents, their favored child. And this was all Superbia wanted. He was schooled among the best, always striving to gain the adoration from his parents given to the knights and heroes in his stories. He graduated from Cambridge as the Valedictorian, and went on to join a private law firm in London. It was one weekend home with his parents, their monthly dinner, when his world was shattered. His father told him that, proud as he was that his son had succeeded as well as he had, he felt as though he'd never lived his own life. Superbia spent that night awake in bed, until an action came to mind. A superbly twisted action, but his point of view was superbly twisted by this point. He found his way to his father's priceless collection of weapons, and picked from the most center display case a long grey sword. Taking the sword, he set about killing the manor's staff. It was then that he saw his first soul. The flickering blue light enticed him like nothing before. So he ate it. And then another. And then the souls of every servant in the manor. 18 in total. The next morning, when his parents awoke, they found their manor a bloody mess, sword marks on the walls and ground. They found their son in the dining hall, cackling madly and cleaning blood off the sword. He asked his parents a single question. "Are you proud of me yet?" Abilities:Abilities | Description | # of souls needed/contributed | Smother | Superbia forces his black cloak to wrap around a victim's mouth, smothering them. This is just a strong fabric, and can be broken out, or, as this requires his full attention, it can be interrupted. | 10 | High Pride | Superbius forms a pair of wings from the back of his cloak, one shaped like a bats and the other like a birds, both black and raggedy. | 20 | Prideful Voice | Superbia's voice rings loud and deep, causing immense pain to the point of bursting eardrums and knocking people out. | 30 | Hurt Pride | Superbia's cloak hardens to the point of being temporarily invulnerable, though his head is still vulnerable. | 40 | Burning Pride | Superbia's hands burn with power, to the point that he can light things on fire just by touching them.. | 50 | Blur | Superbia is able to gain an amazing burst of speed, quick enough to close a distance of 20 yards in only a few moments, though this he cannot run like this indefinitely | 60 | Pointed Pride | Superbia's cloak grows a pair of spiked shoulder pads, often used to crash into and injury people or break down doors. | 70 | Nightcleaver | Superbia's sword (or hand, if he doesn't have his sword) grows longer, and is able to cut through most anything man made. | 80 | Shockwave | Superbia releases a blast of energy in all direction with great force, capable of knocking anyone in a ten foot radius away. | 90 | Superbias | Superbia stabs his sword into the ground, causing it to erupt in an explosion of black lightning. While random, the lightning will start to suck the life out of anyone it hits. | 100 | Misc:Superbia's soul is grey-ish black, with a crooked smile and dangerous gleam in his eye. Soul Count: 86
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| Subject: Re: Superbia April 17th 2014, 8:50 pm | |
| I like the Pride motif, the ability plans seem decent, and the concept of a guy becoming a kishin to make his parents proud. Approved. |
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