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PostSubject: Erica Dea; Death scythe (Finished)   Erica Dea; Death scythe (Finished) I_icon_minitimeJuly 15th 2014, 12:13 am

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Name (Dea, Erica)

Gender: Female

Age: 17

Meister: Her first meister died. Currently, she has no meister.

Weapon Form: What makes Erica such an astounding character is that she doesn’t have a specific shape in her weapon form. She is the member of an aristocratic family in death city, born of a long line of powerful deathscythe weapons. Out of her family, she could even be said to have the most potential because of this specific ability. Erica’s weapon form is a liquid metal that can transform into any shape, form, sharpness, or the like she desires. Her weapon form is a silver liquid alloy that hardens to form a brilliant luster, but looks rather monotonous to outside viewers, completely the opposite to her colorful personality.

What makes her powerful in a meister/weapon combo is merely the magnification of one another’s soul wavelengths. She is an autonomous weapon, meaning she really doesn’t need a meister and fights just fine on her own. Outside of full weapon form, Erica can form, with her limbs, any weapon according to the alchemic rule of equivalent exchange. She can even turn her hair into lethal blades by binding the fibers of her hair together to form a single blade. She often uses her hair and wrists as weapons, almost never using any other body part.

Love Interest: None

Appearance: NOTICE- ONLY THE FIRST FIVE PARAGRAPHS ARE TRULY IMPORTANT. ANYTHING ELSE IS PLACED THERE TO DESCRIBE HER COMMONLY USED COSPLAY.
Erica takes the role of a role of a princess and looks amazing at the part. She is exactly five feet tall and weighs approximately one-hundred and sixteen pounds. From birth, Erica has always been small and fragile in her physicality even to her 15th birthday. She has no extra muscle on her, other than what she has been given through natural growth and cannot be said to have very much fat fat on her body. She is very petite in nearly every way, except for very slight curvature on her bust and waist. Erica has beautiful, straight golden blonde hair that reaches almost to her ankles. her bangs are short-cropped and she has a small pigtail on either side of her head on almost all occasions. Her flawless face and golden brown eyes make her look like a lifesize doll. Her lips are small and have color related to pink cherry blossoms.

Despite her obsession with fashion, Erica usually wears a rather bland battledress. It is a one piece black dress complete with a cape and short skirt that covers one third of her thighs. Her cape is frayed at the bottom where is drags across the ground. Her pigtails, in this costume, are held together by two black stone hair ties. On the dresses abdomen, a thick black metal plate is held in place by black straps and two silver buckles. her battle dress is sleeveless, revealing her sunless, white arm. The half of her bicep closest to the wrist is wrapped by another strapped buckle that keep in place a thin silk sleeve that gradually grows wider as it reaches the beginning of her petite hand. Both arms are covered in this sleeve, each congruent in size and volume and are the same monotonous black color. In the middle of her breast, a silver, four pointed star creates an opening in the dress, revealing the white skin underneath. The star is like one of a compass, pointing perfectly vertical and horizontal. On each thigh are three more silver buckled straps, that serve to keep her muscles relaxed and flexible. The exact same pattern of straps and buckles appear on her calves as well. Erica wears on her feet full black boots, rolled up a few tens of centimeters from her ankle.

for swimwear, Erica wears a similarly black two-piece bikini. Her swimsuit is not stringed, so that it looks more like an athletic bra and bloomers. Her chest piece and front of her waist have the same star shaped crest, a symbol of her family. In her hair, in order to preserve her pigtails, she has the same black stone hair ties.

Erica loved her old private school, so she still wears their uniform on occasion. Her skirt covers one half of her thighs and colored in a green plaid design. The streaks on the plaid design are simply a very light green, in order to match the grass-green on the rest of the skirt. on her torso, she wears a white dress shirt with a light blue bowtie and a tan sweater. her undershirt is neatly kept and non wrinkled. The sleeves of the shirt are normal and reach halfway down her bicep. the sweater sleeveless, with two straps running along her shoulder. at every part that is hemmed, namely the arm and neck holes, red trimming is seen. She still wears the same hair ties as usual. In the middle of her left thigh sits a black strap with a silver buckle. Her tight, navyblue socks stretch to the very end of her calf, near to her knee. Her shoes are non-formal, brown dress shoes with a black sole and slightly raised heel.

Erica commonly enjoys cosplay, usually privately. Her favorite costume is that of a popstar. She wears a thin, white stage microphone with a black muffled tip on her right ear that reaches to the front of her cherry-lipped mouth. Strangely enough, her typical black stone hair ties match this particularly pink and frilly outfit. Her collar is pink and runs the same color parallel to her sleeveless arm holes. A black ribbon with a white stripe down the middle is pinned like a present to the front of her collar by a golden, five-pointed star. Her the chest area is split open, revealing the white skin in the middle of her tiny chest. Her abdomen has a black square with three golden buttons on either side and similarly shaded stripe shooting straight down the middle. The skirt of her dress puffs out at the rear and is decorated in an assortment of golden ornaments. The skirt is three layered, the top two layers being hot pink and color with the bottom a bright white. The trimming of the skirt is as follows. The top layer is trimmed in black, the middle in white, and the bottom in pink. Her thighs are studded with black leather straps and golden buckles, two on each thigh. Erica wears pink and white strapped boots that nearly reach her knees in this costume.

The next costume in her arsenal is orange and white in color with an orange beret. on the beret rests an orange bow in a plaid design, striped with a darker shade of orange surrounding white. She has an undershirt that has two, strip-like sleeves, attached by a thin wire and decorated in orange beads. The style shirt is orange and white plaid. There are no sleeves, where the edges are all hemmed in black. The shirt crosses over the middle like a suit jacket, edges all black with two black buttons pinning the two sides together. Both shirts are a little on the short side which show the bottom of her abdomen and lower half of her bellybutton. A black, gold buckled belt is wrapped around her waist for show. Furthermore, two string style brown belt with gold buckles sit below the larger black one. On her left waist, above her skirt, is a string of large orange beads, attached to her lowest string belt. Her skirt is a orange and white wavy style. Her over skirt is white, tailed, and simple. However, her lower skirt is and and waved, trimmed in a darker shade of orange. On her wrists, orange and white cuffs are wrapped on and held in place by tight black straps. Completing her cosplay, golden boots reach just over halfway up her calves.

Her next cosplay is that of a sailor girl. A white, blue topped sailor cap rests on her beautiful golden hair and black stone hair ties, complete with a golden anchor emblem commonplace in this outfit. Her skirt is super short with a light blue and white pattern. The skirt is held up by a neon yellow belt with another golden anchor buckle. Attached to the belt is a string of red beads with a golden anchor keeping the style in the middle. Her boots are a brilliant white with red stripes running from her red soles and up the sides of her knee high boots. Erica also wears stockings baby blue in color with white horizontal stripes. At the top are two tiny red ribbons. Her shirt reveals her bellybutton and is clad in white, trimmed in blue, and speckled with golden ornaments. Her collar is low and blue with a white streak running along the trim. Her side dangle a string of red beads respectively, matching her short red tie.

Erica’s next outfit is a workout outfit with a musical theme. Her shirt is shirt and black sleeved with a musical stave and notes running over her left shoulder to her right waist. Staves and notes are also found on each sleeve. Her beautiful golden pigtails are still held in place by the same blackstone hair ties. a white jacket with red stripes is tied around her waist, making it seem as though she took it off because she grew hot and sweaty. Her tight pants are striped and hemmed white with an overall black theme and reach halfway down her calves. Pink, puffy sock hang above a black tennis shoe with pink soles and a white trim.

Her final cosplay replaces her usual black hair ties with dark purple ribbons. Erica wears a chinese style one piece dress. A short skirt Has a green base, patterned in white, with an egg-white overskirt, sporting a darkblue streak. Two more purple ribbons are tied around her thighs and her boots are short, heeled and golden colored with white stripes. Her detached sleeves are tied on by more purple ribbons and are colored golden with white frilly trimming. Her shirt is cross-over style and golden. The hemming to the shirt portion is pink. The designs on all of her golden clothing, except her boots, are splashed with white fish. On the back of her skirt is a giant pink bow for a little extra flair to the incredible colorful outfit. Finally, around her abdomen, is a pink strap with purple frills. Another green string is tied around that with a purple rose placed neatly on her left stomach.

Personality:
Erica’s personality can be summed up easily as charismatic. Even though her family looked down on her for not being well enough to become a deathscythe for the majority of her life up until this point, she has an innate ability to persuade people. She has plenty of friends at school because of this, and because she is incredibly beautiful. Being of noble blood, Erica had to learn all sorts of regal things, such as high quality manners and negotiation skills, she took this on easily, with a large amount of skill.
Not only did she have a flexible personality, but she is also highly intelligent. She has no issues with learning anything she is taught quickly, ranging from arithmetic to strategy. Her computational skills are far above normal, in order to balance out with her poor physical condition.

History:
Erica grew up in a noble family and because of this, she was often called a princess. She was born on April 5th in Death City. Because of the saying “April showers bring me flowers”, and because she is was always an astounding beauty, people have also taken a liking to calling her an assortment of flowers. Her family bloodline is that of many very powerful weapons, which was the main reason for her great weapon ability, and her family crest, a four pointed star.

Since her birth, Erica has always been of below average height. Her petite body is clear on this fact. As a baby, she was incredibly sickly. The only reason for her survival has been her family’s large amount of savings, which allowed for top notch medicines and treatments. Private doctors and nurses came to her house everyday to check up on her health, regulate her soul, and fight off her chronic illnesses. Erica was never permitted to leave the house, except to go to school, until she became a freshman in highschool.

Because of her poor physical condition, Erica has an incredible intelligence and can utilize more of her brain’s functions than the average person. But even this crazy intelligence wasn’t enough to please her family. They wanted Erica to become a death scythe like every one of her ancestors. Her family knows of her power that reaches even beyond their grasp, so they hold her to higher standards, treating her like a prodigy. She couldn’t do most of the things she was expected of, so her parents treated her like trash. Of her two siblings, she was the youngest and was often picked on, even by her two older brothers. She was the third heir to the Dea main branch family, and was disgraced to this level. But, since public discrimination would also bring shame to the family, it was mostly kept between the main family, her parents and her brothers.

Nonetheless, Erica, like her brothers, went through diplomatic training and other things required by noble families. Erica excelled in all of these matters. By the age of thirteen, she had already reached the level of mastery her parents held in these areas, but her parents didn’t care about such trivialities. She was nothing but a worthless daughter who would never reach up to the sky-high expectations required by her parents. The bitterness in her heart built up uncontrollably, causing her slightly Tsundere attitude.

Erica was overly bossy with the maids and servants, requiring strange treatment and giving odd tasks meant to wear them out, but the wrath induced by her family was not satisfied with merely this. In the end, she used her diplomatic skills to bend other kids at school to her will. Putting on the airs of a kind princess, Erica ruled her middle school. Only when she was allowed certain freedoms at the age of fourteen did her attitude grow lighter. She began to truly smile then and grew a crazy fondness for fish, cute clothes, theater, and singing.

At dinner, Erica would eat no meat other than fish. She loved the tenderness and the juicy flavors that flowed from every bite. She would often visit costume shops and dress up in cosplay, which she paid for with her hobbies in dance, singing, modeling, and theater. She was incredibly beautiful and immediately became a child star. Erica modeled for a wide range of companies, acted in her own theater troupe, and performed at restaurants. Her theater troupe was very small and consisted of only about six or seven actors, of course, not including stage hands. They usually met three times a week to practice and prepare with everyone else for a couple hours at a time, thus, Erica became fairly busy.

At the age of fifteen, her life began to change for the worse. Erica’s chronic heart illness had her hospitalized at Death City’s main hospital. No normal doctors or nurses knew any method to cure her, or even extend her life. She rested all day and night on her death bed, being attended to regularly by medical professionals. After a few months, her family had all but abandoned the sickly girl on life support. But Erica was determined to live, her courage and raging spirit reaching full bloom. That night she was visited.

Lord Death walked through the door to her hospital room, Spirit the death scythe at his side. Draped in his black cloak with a comical skeletal mask, Lord Death looked like a skeleton from a comedy play, but his pressing aura was immediately known by any who saw him. In fact, Lord Death’s soul was so large, it acted like a barrier for the entirety of Death City, separating it from the natural world. This mysterious and powerful god of death strode casually over to her bedside and produced a bundle of wildflowers from a fold in his robe, placing them in a fancy pink vase on a nightstand to the right of Erica’s hospital bed.

“Looky here young lady, it’s not time for you to die yet!” Claimed Lord Death. How? How could she be saved from this gripping pain? Be rescued from the impending peril that constantly floated over her head, like a thundercloud. Erica grew a serious expression, then one of fear when she saw what the Reaper of Souls was doing. He casually raised his hand. The enlarged white hand grew exponentially in size until it touched the ten meter high ceiling. “NO, PLEASE NO!” Erica begged, fearful for her life.

“REAPER CHOP!!!!!”

The Words echoed through the air as Lord Death’s hand closed in on Erica’s chest. Constant pain flowed through her body on contact. Strange, she was falling at an alarming rate, ‘Wasn’t I just in a bed?’ Erica questioned herself. Located on the top floor of the 5 story hospital building, Erica was incredibly high up. She felt her back break about 4 hard objects before her motion stopped. Blood spurted out of her mouth from the impact she had taken. Then her eyes glazed over and she was knocked unconscious. In all, Erica was sent flying through all 5 floors before coming to a stop, creating a crater at the ground floor. Lord Death looked down the hole he had created. Four beds, complete with rooms could be seen as Lord Death stared at the battered girl he has just used to make all these holes. “Oh my,” Lord Death complained, “Looks like this is going to be expensive.” Spirit stared in disbelief at what Lord Death had done, then scolded the Reaper because of what he had done. “How could you do that to such a pretty little girl?!” Spirit was wearing his usual suit. His thin hands were taped tightly to his face and his body was wriggling like a snake. His face contorted, eyes turned white and his mouth shaped into an oval. Black lines ran down his face and he turned pale. Jiggling like Jell-O, Spirit looked like an idiotic ghost. Lord Death found this quite repulsive, so he gave his Death Scythe a similar treatment, except Spirit flew out the window and soared into the sky, headed for unknown areas miles away.

When the doll-faced girl awoke, she was staring up into Lord Death’s retarded looking mask. “Hello there, little girl,” Lord Death greeted cheerfully, “Feeling any better?” Erica wanted to call him a bastard and say ‘HELL NO!’ but she couldn’t, or was too frightened to do so. Furthermore, even though every part of her body was on fire, she didn’t feel and gripping pain in her chest anymore. Her heart had completely returned to normal. At this time, Lord Death said this before disappearing in a magic circle shaped like his stupid mask: “Come to DWMA and become strong. Strong enough to become my Death Scythe and live up to your family name!” Erica was shocked, in pain, and in awe, but at the same time, she was touched. Lord Death, patron of Death City and Headmaster of the DWMA, had personally come to meet her, and even saved her life! But she was also quite pissed off, “DID HE HAVE TO HIT ME LIKE THAT!” she cried.

Erica, however, was not discharged from the hospital for quite awhile, a few weeks to be exact. Lord Death’s legendary “Reaper Chop” had broken literally every bone in her body. Only days of surgery and many weeks of healing ‘magic’ brought her back to decent health. Though she was still a sickly, frail little girl, Erica was now free of her most chronic and deadly malfunction, plus she had just gotten personally invited to attend the DWMA. But she still had to fill out her application and all that boring stuff. She didn’t quit her regular hobbies and the lot, but she knew she was going to have to work harder than ever to keep up with her studies, missions, and freetime activities. Erica sighed to herself. “Either this is going to really suck bigtime, or this will be the best thing that ever happened to me.” Truth of the matter is, Erica’s mother, father, and brothers all stopped giving the petite beauty a hard time after that incident with Lord Death. Actually, they started holding her in high reverence. “I could really get used to this,” commented Erica.

Only a few days had passed since she was accepted to the DWMA, Erica attended the “Crescent Moon” class, (The class with Soul Eater and the rest) because her ability as a weapon was considered extraordinary. Upon her first day in the class, she was informed by the professor, Stein, that there were a trio of meisters without weapons in the class. The first was a muscle head named Nero, the picture of a complete idiot, Nero about a foot taller than Erica and looked like a well-built truck. The next was a boy who looked young enough to be her little brother. The final one, though, was a tall black-haired girl by the name of Himari Noihara, a japanese girl. After meeting and talking, they instantly became great friends and became a weapon/meister pair.


Himari and Erica quickly rose the ranks in the class, passing all of the slacker Canon characters and obtaining 99 kishin egg souls quickly. Then the day came when the two received their mission to slay a witch by the nickname of “Mantis”. Mantis was a witch on the level of Medusa. She wore a green, flowing robe the color of lime and carried two curved swords of the same color template. She was a slippery witch and a murderous character. She had killed countless 3-star meister teams, using magic to amplify her swords, allowing them to release a magical shockwave after only a using a simple sword slice. Her mansion was in Toronto, Canada. This is where the students of the DWMA, along with a few other meister/weapon teams, met to combat the witch.

It was night time when they attacked, fresh snow trickled to the ground, turning the forest landscape into something you would see in a movie. The scenery was beautiful, but a lady cloaked in green stood in the middle of a dozen meister/weapon pairs. This place was about to turn into a battle-ground.

The white snow had turned the color of blood after a few minutes of fighting. Every other meister team had died, cut into pieces, some were cut into many pieces, while others were so mangled, no one could make out any distinguishing figures. Himari and Erica stood in the midst of all of this carnage. Erica had just released her weapon form to stand face-to-face with the green witch, protecting her badly injured meister from impending death. The witch in a green cloak walked with leisure, knowing full well that no one was going anywhere. Her powers were frightening, anyone who had tried to escape her blade learned too late that she could fire off streaks from her blades, as long as they were within one-hundred yards, no one could escape her deadly blade.

Erica, too, was hurt quite badly. She had taken the brunt of every attack the witch had sent at her while in weapon form, but the duty of a weapon was to lay down her life for her meister, which she would gladly do for this girl who had become her best friend over the past year in the academy. “Hey girly, I won’t kill you if you become my weapon. My, my, I have never seen a weapon like you!” Mantis spoke persuasively, offering to spare Erica if she became the servant of the witch. “No way would I ever join you!” Cried Erica while turning both wrists and hands into scimitar-like weapons. The witch stopped a few paces away and scrutinized the fierce beauty in front of her. Her eyes pierced into her soul and viewed her personality, characteristics, and everything else about her, for this was a simple skill among the witches.

After realizing the resolve of the girl, Mantis sent the flat of her blade to strike against Erica’s abdomen, sending her sprawling a few feet backwards, too far away to protect her best friend. Standing above the unconscious Himari, Mantis spoke with evil undertones, to which Erica replied with screams of despair.“If you won’t become mine because of this girl, I will just kill her.”
“NO PLEASE!!!” Too late, Mantis stabbed her blade into Himari’s neck, slicing it clean off, but she didn’t stop there. The witch then brushed her sword all around the corpse, slicing flesh open and turning the dead meister into a filet. Erica cried and scream in protest, “No Himari! Give her to me!” but they were all in vain. Her arms and legs were torn and scattered, her organs torn and strewn in a bloody mess, all that was left to cut was her soul, which Mantis placed in a pouch beneath her cloak.

Erica raged and cried. She turned her hair into needles and rushed recklessly at Mantis, swiping her scimitars and tossing her hair in feeble attacks. Mantis blocked them all with ease and knock Erica to the ground with a winding kick to her chest. Erica lay, sprawled on the ground, and melted the snow with her bitter tears. But when she caught sight of Mantis, her crying stopped and her eyes turned on her with disgust. Mantis climbed on top of Erica, sitting on her with a leg on either side of her body, which was her only mistake. She thought she had crushed Erica’s iron-will with that display of superiority, but she hadn’t. A blade shot out from Erica’s chest, one of her ribs turned into a blade, and pierced Mantis’s heart, killing her in a matter of seconds. The only sound she let out was a surprised gasp before she doubled over.

A week from that day, Erica returned to school, having already attended Himari’s funeral and cried all she could. She was like a zombie for all of the morning on that day, until she was called to the Death Room. She was congratulated by Lord Death after eating the witch soul in front of him and turning into a deathscythe. On that day, she vowed never to have a permanent meister again and became a freelance weapon, picking up any difficult job with any meister she could compare with. Erica had a charismatic soul, making it easy for people to pair up with her, so she was the ideal character for this part. To this current day, Erica had been allowed to keep Himari’s soul in a wardrobe-shrine she has in her luxury apartment, in order to remember her one and only true meister she lost in order to become a killer weapon.

Miscellaneous:
Her fragile body is to be taken into serious consideration because it balances out the versatility of her powerful partial and complete transformation abilities.

Fighting Style:
Erica’s fighting style is described simply as highly aggressive. Erica was given a powerful partial transformation that she takes very seriously, being able to turn into any sword-like blade gives her the ability of a wide-range of attacks, ranging from penetrating thrusts with thin, rapier like hair, or slices
from swift khopesh or scimitar like weapons, and since khopeshes, rapiers, and scimitars all focus on speed and agility, as well as economy of movement, they are the of the perfect style for the nimble huntress. Erica prefers to keep her battles short, not for aesthetic purposes, but rather so that she doesn’t run out of stamina or grow injured from a lengthy fight. Because of her incredibly weak body, this is all she can do to insure victory.

Erica is a very good candidate for solo missions. Her partial transformation puts her above or on par with the fighting abilities of most meisters. While not having special spiritual powers that meisters use, she is very efficient as an assassin type character. Her transformations are silent and give off no light, unless going into full transformation, and she can control multiple transformations at once. She can attack with stretchy, bladed locks of hair while slicing with multiple wrist blades. Controlling her hair requires absolutely no energy besides that for concentration, making her hair one of her most prominent weapons. Especially since she can control her hair at will to move any way she desires. the most effective way to defeat this would be to shatter her absolute concentration abilities.

During full transformation, Erica has the ability to transform into any blade her wielder desires. For instance, Erica can be in the shape of a broadsword at one moment in order to deliver powerful, decisive blows, and at the next moment take the shape of a thin rapier, specializing in swift thrusting attacks. While not being entirely as versatile as someone like Tsubaki who is able to transform into any ninja-like weapon, her transformation capabilities are nothing short of superb.

Finally, Erica has learned nothing in the way of martial arts. Whether it is because her weak constitution won’t perfit hand-to-hand combat, or she merely can’t produce powerful enough attacks to make a difference in a fistfight, Erica can’t fight well up and personal. She makes use of her nimble body to dodge instead of parrying attacks. Also, she doesn’t deliver powerful, crushing blows, but rather executes swift slashes towards weak points to disable opponents. Usually attacking major structural muscles, like calves and hamstrings, or splicing necessary nerves and pressure points, such as slitting the wrists or neck. In this way, Erica fights exceptionally well against tank-like foes that have an overall advantage against the normal style of overkill attacks.

Likes:
Fish- Fish are one of Erica’s favorite foods and animals, not only because they are delicious, but she loves how the majority of fish dishes are tender.

Cute Outfits- She loves to dress up.

Singing- Erica always had a dream to be a popstar.

Shopping- Any girl who loves clothes loves to shop. She can spend hours in a store, picking out just one outfit.

Dancing- Erica has extreme talent in all theatrical displays, including dancing.

Dislikes:
Perverts- Erica is a beautiful little girl of child model quality. She often has many strange older men looking at her, causing her to hate perverts with an extreme passion.

Any Meat Other Than Fish- Erica shows extreme enmity toward any meat other than fish. Mainly because they are all “inferior” to the tender juiciness that all fish carry.

Quiet- Erica’s impatient character does not permit peace. She would rather die than sit in a quiet room.

Ugly Things- Erica is gorgeous, so she gets a lot of stalkers. Usually, they are very ugly and annoying.

Hobbies:
Cosplaying- Erica loves cute clothes, so cosplaying is not out of her range. She loves to dress up in all sorts of roles, from a policewoman to a popstar.

Theatre- Erica harbors a deep love towards singing and dancing. She is a highly talented performer and she enjoys putting her talents to the test.

Singing- Erica sings at a multitude of restaurants because her parents don’t want her to be known as a ‘popstar’.


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PostSubject: Re: Erica Dea; Death scythe (Finished)   Erica Dea; Death scythe (Finished) I_icon_minitimeJuly 24th 2014, 6:50 pm

Okay, first, remove all references to Lord Death from your app. Further, please reduce the length a little. Your appearance does NOT need to be five paragraphs long. Further, the site canon has this take place 20 years after the main series, and thus, your character would not be able to have been in the same class as the canon characters. 

Next, Death City is in AMERICA. There are no nobles. Further, if 'Mantis' was on the level of Medusa, your character would be dead. It took Stein, a three star meister known as the greatest meister the DWMA ever had and Lord Deaths personal Death Scythe to kill her.

Next, remove the word 'retarded' from your app. Retarded is a slur against people with mental disabilities. Further, being sent through four floors would turn your character into toothpaste.

"Because of her poor physical condition, Erica has an incredible intelligence and can utilize more of her brain’s functions than the average person." This is a fallacy statement. She is not incredibly smart because she was sickly, she is incredibly smart because she spent the time most people use for physical activity studying.
In her history, it mentions that she is essentially disgraced and that she is treated like trash; this greatly conflicts with her personality where she is capable of persuading people and also got what she wanted. These things do not match up; one of them needs to be changed.
Explain the theatre troupe as this seems a bit too far-reaching.

If you want this character approved, your going to have to fix all of the above, or drop the character. Refuse to fix it, and you will receive a infraction. This is nonnegotiable.
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