Wolf, just a few things:
1.) If you could get rid of the parentheses around everything,
2.) Appearance, Personality, and History all have to be at least a hundred words, or around there. While History is about where we want it, if you could please expand on Appearance and Personality we'd appreciate it
3.) Grammar things like capitalizing the starts of sentences, and putting in commas and periods to separate thoughts
4.) There's an answer to the "Have you read the rules" question inside the rules. Please read the rules to get the answer. Thank you~