Kaze Saffire

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Name (Surname, Forename) Kaze Saffire

Gender/Sex: Male

Age: 16

Meister:

Weapon Form:

Kaze's weapon form is that of an abnormally sized Nodachi, or standardized japanese sword. He has a human transformation where he can turn a limb into the blade of the sword, however, he tends to not use it often because he is slow, has limited to no mobility and cannot come to really balance himself due to the weight he puts on while doing such, causing him to really only use this when he is in absolute danger and needs to defend himself from an immediate attack. He has a two part weapon transformation. His first turns him into just sheath at first, which has a sling that his meister can either use to carry him or swing him around for use by. This form is for more tactical usage, such as clearing enemy lines on a mission that may require as little casualties as possible, or breaking down an object such as a fence or a hollow wall. It is a form that he will also revert to when sparring, as he is capable of ensuring that if he connects with an ally or a friend, that the blow of his sheath form will feel as light as a feather His other form tacks on the actual sword for usage, while the sheath part of him can either be slung across his meisters body or on their waist. While the sword itself is gigantic, as long as Kaze's meister is on the same wavelength as he is, the meister will practically be able to wield him as if he were a broom handle. However, if not on the same wavelength, movement will be EXTREMELY slow at first. The sword and sheath can be combined for some heavy attacks, but it takes a lot of energy out of him and he almost always reverts back to his human form after that, especially if used too much or too often.

Love Interest:

Orientation (Sexual/Romantic): Straight

Appearance: (Please describe the character's physical appearance here)

Kaze is a fairly skinned individual, who wears prescription glasses, which he can see without but he prefers to wear them because he's been told it suits him, and sports a pair of purple eyes that turn gold whenever he gets serious or is scheming something, and long purple hair to match. He stands at about 5'11 with an average slim build, and is often seen as quite fashionable. He is almost always seen wearing a dress shirt or a polo, a tie, jeans, and a fedora, although sometimes he will do without that if he feels that a lady is cherishing his flourishing hair, which he usually keeps tied up in an elongated ponytail in the back with a couple of short bangs up front for style. He dons a checkered wristband on side and wears a different necklace for every day of the week, so long as he can remember to throw one on when he goes out for the day.

Personality: (Please describe the character's personality and their mannerisms here)

Kaze can be a bit of an airhead sometimes. He can hear a joke and he will tilt his head in confusion, but then understand said joke some odd time later and then proceed to laugh out loud out of nowhere, much to the confusion of those surrounding him. For the most part, Kaze is the quiet type, and is often spotted walking with his hands in his pockets. He will speak when spoken to or if you are familiar with him. Otherwise, he's not really much of a conversation starter unless it comes to a pretty lady. He is a pretty sly talker when it comes down to it however, and can be quite cunning and clever at times, especially when it comes to tricking somebody into doing something that they might not initially want to do. He is the kind of person who will go out of his way to help anybody that he is loyal to and has his trust, even if it inconveniences him greatly. He also has a distinct weakness to food, and his stomach often takes control of him even when in the middle of something of utter importance. Also a bit of a closet bookworm and nerd. He will try to contain his knowledge of any given subject and at times fail and just geek out on particular things, something that those who know him will do on purpose just to make him blush after he finishes ranting.

History:

Problems for Kaze began almost immediately after his conception. As soon as the doctor was about to present his parents with him, he turned into a weapon, was dropped due to his overwhelming weight, and went crashing through a couple of floors in the hospital building. This pattern would persist for a while to the point where a specialist had to be brought in to bring his transformations under control since he clearly had no way of doing as such. Nobody in his family, who consisted solely of different kinds of firearms, could figure out the mystery behind his transformation, but that only them want to learn more of how to go about caring for him.

Growing up, Kaze was able to stop himself from fully transforming, but he still had partial transformations that would end up destroying parts of his house from time to time when triggered. Attending school wasn't much better for him either, as he would often get picked up for being a so called freak. Even though weapons were the norm where he was from, he was a ludicrously oversized one. And whenever he was triggered, he would end up on the ground from his inability to deal with his own weight from one of his limbs becoming a heavy blade. Despite being a grade a student, he would often come home from school miserable, and would often blindly wander streets at night, unconsciously transform into a sheath and get desecrated by whoever happened to walk by him, thinking that he was just a piece of garbage that somebody had left out.

Upon his teenage years, Kaze finally got a grasp on his powers, and decided never to use them unless there was an absolute reason for it, or if there was somebody who could actually work with him on it. As such, with all the approval from his family, he decided to attend the DWMA and search for a partner who'd be willing to wield such a ridiculous sized weapon such as himself. Nobody really knows what he can do yet, as if he shows off his partial transformation, he tends to do it while standing up against a wall so that he's not falling over himself as he is still in the process of learning how to shift his weight so that he can actually semi-wield himself if need be.

Soul Count: 20

Miscellaneous: Animal lover although for some reason they seem to hate him most of the time

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Subject: Re: Kaze Saffire June 15th 2016, 4:40 am

A few notes on the formatting of the app; you can remove the stuff in brackets, as it's meant to be replaces with what you have written, you should also put the answer within the speech marks at the end, so that they are in the middle like the rest. Fix those and you're fine on that front.

Much of what is described within the weapon form is unneeded. All weapons feel completely weightless to a meister who can match their wavelength. They cannot be lifted at all if the wavelength does not match. Also, weapons being able to change limbs into their weapon form is standard, even if not all weapons can do it. It's not uncommon. To add to that, the partial weapon form also does not seem to weigh anything to the weapon. The weapon form can't have two different 'modes' as that is a bit too close to straight up having multiple weapon forms, which we do not allow. Also, the weapon and all parts of them must be interconnected, as a soul cannot split up between pieces. The sheath would have to be connected to the sword by some sort of chain or string or somesuch, and be a part of the full weapon form. A partial transformation would still be able to materialise as the sheath alone, since a weapon can pick which part of their weapon form to change partially into. That, or just do without it.

Considering your history, the soul count of 20 also does not make much sense to have, since he never had a meister or took on Kishin Eggs, judging by what is written.