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PostSubject: Anna star power (Dropped)   Anna star power (Dropped) I_icon_minitimeFebruary 11th 2014, 3:11 am

Name:  Anna star power

Gender:  female

Age: 18

Weapon: any one that will take her

Love Interest:  

Appearance: she tall buff and busty with short black hair and pale skin. She’s blind in both eyes.  She keeps her short black hair in a gothic style hairdo.  She loves to wear a black leather one piece bodysuit

Personality: she is a sweet kind over baring person can also be a tad on the wild side.  

History: do to events in her past she can't remember she has no history up in tell her 15th birth day she will find her dream girl and remake the world in her own image no evil just peace her goal is to also one day get married to her dream girl if she can only find her

Miscellaneous: "I will end the pain and start the world a new"

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PostSubject: Re: Anna star power (Dropped)   Anna star power (Dropped) I_icon_minitimeFebruary 11th 2014, 3:15 pm

The personallity needs more detail and, to be honest, I don't see how a glind girl would be able to fight, wield a bladed weapon, or try to start a new world. Unless she's planning on trying to lead a group or something from behind the scenes, she'll be screwed because there's no mention of any abilities to help her see in a fight.
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PostSubject: Re: Anna star power (Dropped)   Anna star power (Dropped) I_icon_minitimeFebruary 11th 2014, 7:51 pm

do you rember mary firewind I just to her bio and changed it abit
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PostSubject: Re: Anna star power (Dropped)   Anna star power (Dropped) I_icon_minitimeMay 2nd 2014, 9:23 pm

Okay, so Deth's comments still have some ground here.

If she is combatant, then you need to explain how it is that she is able to fight blind. What adaptations has she made to her daily life to cope with her blindness? How does she avoid attacks that she can't see, or even know that they're coming?

Also, the leather bodysuit, I think, is a bit too much, especially at a school.
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