Oh gosh, I don't normally mention this, but there's quite a few spelling mistake. Either auto-corret's really horrible, or you somehow managed to spell both "miles" and "road" wrong.... Sorry, that just kind-of bugs me. Also, while it's on my mind, that avatar is effing creepy! (It's seeing into my soul!!!)
Anyways, other than that, her history is.... Alright. It leaves things a bit open, but doesn't build much for the character. Same for her personallity. It's enough to get her where she needs to be, but not really much else. Either way, though......
Accepted!