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| Subject: Razme' (NPC sort of thing for Kai. Could become a main character in her own right) INACTIVE May 10th 2014, 2:50 am | |
| Name: Razme' (She has no last name) (Raz- Mehh) Race: Witch (Voodoo Doctor) Gender: Female Animal Form: Alligator Appearance: She wears a gray robe that shows quite a lot of skin for someone of her more advanced age. Various totems and talismans adorn her neck, arms, and wrists. She wears tight fitted sandals that she can move in surprisingly well. She also carry's a alligator skin pouch. The Voodoo doctor has gray eyes, tan skin, and white hair. She generally has a laid back expression. Personality: Not actually evil, unlike most witches. She tends to help humans, often disguising her secret base as a food stand that sells gumbo. She doesn't believe that Kishin's exist, but does believe that weapons, and their meisters, are in fact the evil blight on the earth, and wishes to harry their every movement. History: Razme' hails from the swamp lands of Africa. She wasn't always a witch, born with little power to call her own. Her mother ran a small apothacary that gave Razme' a chance to study Herbology. She also greatly enjoyed folk tails told by the various townsfolk in her swampy village. Her entire life was changed when she stumbled quite accidentally on a creature with no name in the human tongue, and only one purpose. It imprinted itself on her, and in exchange for her continued peace and happiness gave her powerful Voodoo powers, and the ability to transform into a alligator. She soon after ran away from home when she could no longer control her powers. She practiced for many years attempting to destroy the one that cursed her, a creature that to this day haunts her dreams. She learned of the creating of gods, the power of voodoo, the summoning of ancient spirits of the swamp, Foretelling the possible paths of the future, as well as raising the of the dead. Then she learned the monsters name, and used that name to destroy it forever. She now performs her art in peace, running her home as a food stand selling gumbo, while aiding the towns people of her new home in secret. Abilities: While little is actually known about the Voodoo doctor, enough encounters have given rise to knowledge of her more commonly used abilities. As one would expect, she fights using the power of Voodoo, a combination of magic and curses very unlike an ordinary witches. She has very few direct attacks, instead using an ability known as Curse Link. A few other abilities are noted below, but most are derived by Curse Link. - Curse Link:
Curse Link is not actually an attack in and of itself, but a set up for her basic attacks. Curse link involves taking a part of her target, such as blood, skin, or hair, and affixing it to one of her various puppets. It takes various forms, but essentially allows her to dominate an opponent through a couple of ways. This control is near absolute, requiring a strong soul to counter-act. Destruction of the puppet tool ends the link.
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Mommet mode is her primary offensive mode of Curse Link. She affixes the linked item to a clay doll. From hence forth any afflicition she causes the doll is rebounded onto the target. This includes burns, stabs, and poisons. Only one mommet can be utilized at any one time, and the spell wears off after about five minutes. Still, the damage she can inflict on her enemy in that five minutes can be devastating.
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Puppet mode is her second form of link. The linked item is affixed to a wood puppet with no strings. From hence forth any movement she causes the puppet to make will cause the target to move in the same way. This includes throwing, although moments after levaing her possession the spell wears off. While the spell lasts a minute longer than Mommet mode, it is much easier to displace/destroy. The target is also capable of resisting, although this comes at great cost to their strength. The Voodoo doctor has also been able to use this to force specific soul wavelengths to emanate from the target.
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Body mode is a form she rarely uses. Instead of affixing the linked item to a doll, or puppet, she imprints it onto her self. This affect only lasts for three minutes, but during that time any damage or malady she suffers is dealt onto the target. This means that if she is killed, her target will die with her at the same time. It is a move she only uses if she knows she will lose. This doesn't stop her opponent from moving or acting on their own, but only reflects damage. The constitution of her foe does not in any way dispel the affect. Knocking her unconscious will cause the spell to run out faster, dropping the time limit by a third, although this will result in her foe losing consciousness as well.
The Voodoo doctor has also been known to create her own custom gods, although they are not capable of directly helping her in a fight. They can help her shape the future around her to one she prefers, such as causing certain events to occur. They are not at all powerful, as a god derives its power from those that believe in it, and can only shape small events. Her favorites are Old Swamp Man, Miss Alligator, and Bones. She creates and discards others as needed, although never gives out their names to otheres, or preaches of them. Gods with one follower are much easier to control. Misc: Little is actually known of her by the DWMA. She prefers to keep her existence secret. Have you read the rule? I Love Soul Eater! |
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| Subject: Re: Razme' (NPC sort of thing for Kai. Could become a main character in her own right) INACTIVE May 11th 2014, 7:18 pm | |
| I'm a bit disappointed that you have not offered a picture of her, and you need some grammar edits, but she seems to be a good character overall.
Also, you can NOT make an NPC. Please remove that from the title; she is an OC. My only request is that you change where she can make "gods" into something more like "idols" or "spirits," for clarity purposes. For future reference, please refrain from trying to work a character into a thread before it has actually been approved, as all characters must be approved before they can be used. Otherwise, you are free and good to go! ACCEPTED! |
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| Subject: Re: Razme' (NPC sort of thing for Kai. Could become a main character in her own right) INACTIVE May 22nd 2014, 12:49 am | |
| God's are how she refers to them. They are fueled by her belief. I'll change the grammer. Thanks. |
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