Danny Black

Here is something that I had in mind when I described Danny

Name Black, Danny

Gender/Sex: Male

Age: 17

Meister: -

Weapon Form: A maul. A modified sledgehammer, made for combat. Made completely from steel, heavy and sluggish(to anybody except the right meister), but can deal considerable damage because of its sheer force. About 6 feet/180 cm in total lenght. (here is an idea what he would look like, just remove the skulls and the spikes and make the hammer portion larger)

Love Interest: -

Orientation (Sexual/Romantic):Straight

Appearance: Danny is large, standing at 6'5 foot/195 cm and weighs 264lbs/120 kg. He has thick and hairy arms and legs. He is chubby, suggesting that he is overweight. Danny has short, unkempt, light brown hair and small brown eyes that usually stare at nothing. He has square jaw. His face is expressionless/passive. It is usually really hard to tell what he is thinking(or if he is thinking anything at all) because of this. He has slightly tanned skin. He usually wears T-shirt, sweatpants and large sneakers (he prefers comfort over style)

Personality: Best way describing Danny would be saying that he is slow. It takes him time to solve problems normal person would solve in matter of seconds/minutes. He usually follows orders from other people as he thinks it makes his life easier. Because of this Danny is easy to control and manipulate, without him noticing a thing. Besides that he is very kindhearted and peaceful and ready to help anybody who ask help from him.

History: Danny has worked since he was 7, to help his parents. Because of this he doesn't have much education (although he can read and write). All of his work consisted of some kind of manual labor, since he couldn't handle harder tasks. When he was 10 he discovered his power as he needed a hammer but couldn't find one. His arm transformed into a hammer and since then he always used his hammer arms rather than actual hammer when working. People soon learned about Danny's power but didn't care about it because of his peaceful nature. At the age of 16 one of the DWMA teachers saw him working with his hammer arm and asked Danny to follow him to the academy.

Miscellaneous: Danny likes two things: Sweets and cats. He has and will sometimes accept candy and other sweet things as payment. He is also very fond of cats and will usually drop whatever he is doing when seeing a cat and go try petting it. It should be noted that if Danny ever sees somebody hurt a cat, he will do the same thing to the person as what he did to the cat (this will get very interesting when dealing with witches)

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(let me know if I fucked up something, made grammar mistakes, or something is too short. I'll try to fix it as soon as I can)

I'd like to see some more complex sentences in your writing, as well as some extraneous description and more varied word choice. The character himself seems well thought out, though, and I like the addition of the quirk where he likes cats a lot. I like the history as well, as it seems fairly unique, though simple and straightforward. Well done on your character, and...


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Beyril Stone wrote:

I'd like to see some more complex sentences in your writing, as well as some extraneous description and more varied word choice. The character himself seems well thought out, though, and I like the addition of the quirk where he likes cats a lot. I like the history as well, as it seems fairly unique, though simple and straightforward. Well done on your character, and...


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Wow, thanks! I try adding something and I'll try improving my word choices :)