It's a good bio, but the only thing that's keeping me from accepting it is the use of Stein's character in his backstory and personallity. It fits his character, but I'm not sure what the other Admins have planned for him offscreen, if anything. For all I know, Ace was planning to reveal Stein was killed off by the Kishin Reaver or something. So, to keep thing simple, I'd like you to just change it to a more general meister that saved him, if that's alright with you. Otherwise, I'll need to contact Sov and Rock to look it over, too, before I'd feel comftrable accepting it, which could take a while.