There's only one change you need to make, Khar. This character is mentioned to be an anti-material rifle which could be good but it at least reads like it makes and fires it's own actual bullets, which is a bit OP because, realistically, who's going to be able to literally dodge and survive being shot with high-power rounds. It needs to be changed to specify it's a wavelength gun.... HOWEVER, to keep with it's inspiration, you can say that it inflicts more damage on armored opponents, which would still make it very effective for a ranged wavelength weapon.