Drake McKrew (finished)

Drake McKrew

Gender/Sex: male

Age: 14

Meister: Sebastian Maxwell

Weapon Form: a cannon that covers the meister's entire forearm and shaped like the head of an oriental dragon. There are two triggers inside the cannon one controls the jaw and the other makes the dragon cannon fire chunks of soul wavelength energy (about 3 1/2 in. in diameter) of course because the artillery is so large the rate of fire is slowed  

Orientation (Sexual/Romantic): heterosexual

Appearance: Drake wears a white t-shirt, khaki cargo shorts, and an eye patch on his right eye. He keeps his black hair slicked back and has very unsettling red eyes despite his friendly and childish personality. he is 5'7'' and weighs 170 lbs he has a slender yet toned body and broad shoulders

Personality: he is very energetic and friendly. he hardly ever loses his cool but has an extremely hard time staying focused. he considers his meister his best friend and his morals are straight. he is really smart but he doesn't let it show unless his life or innocent lives are threatened.

History: Drake is a transfer student from Ireland who came to the DWMA to control his weapon abilities
he does not know much about his parents because they were killed when he was very young and he lived with his auntie meg for about 10 years and living on his own for about 2 years. Drake can box, run at a significant speed, and had a very unusual job as a freelancing fire breather for birthday parties. He was late to his fist day of school so all the meisters had already found weapons ... except for Sebastian Maxwell who later became his meister.
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