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PostSubject: Atlas (Rated T, WIP)   Atlas (Rated T, WIP) I_icon_minitimeOctober 10th 2016, 7:27 pm

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Name Atlas

Gender/Sex: N/A

Age: 30

Meister: Achima

Weapon Form: A huge minigun that's bigger than any normal human was intended to wield

Madness Strand: Trauma

Love Interest:

Orientation (Sexual/Romantic): Asexual

Appearance: Titan is an eight foot tall android designed for combat. He moves with very little grace and has treads on his feet not unlike those of a tank for traction. His body is very very heavily armored, inches thick in many places. He has camera's all over the top half of his head and a ventilation shaft angled towards his back. His soul burns steadily inside the core of his head as a power source. He has several bags on his body as big as backpacks for transporting cargo and weighs three thousand pounds. He has a number of tools built directly into his body, like a welding torch and a drill that extends from his shoulders for working with mechanics.

Personality: Atlas as a machine is very mechanical in his interactions. He talks with a sophisticated, simple vocabulary and is generally very helpful to any humans, monsters, or Kishin that ask him for assistance. He is very pleasant and even docile. He woulden't hurt a fly and will even allow harm to come to himself just to calm someone else down. However when put into situations when he or someone he cares about is in danger his old, heavily corrupted combat routines will take control. Flooding him with madness.

In his fits like this Atlas is very dangerous, seeking to kill whatever presents any threat with no regard for what is in his way, short of allies. He will rapidly spout out about his intentions to kill all of humanity and how it is an organic plague on the world. He speaks like a hyper aggressive internet troll claiming to have had relations with the mothers of every piece of human cattle around him. Often logging into dozens of message boards one after the other to flood them with hate and spam. Coming out of these fits leaves him confused and scared as he cannot remember events during that time.

As his madness progresses these two states of mind will slowly fuse together. Making his normal self more offensive and aggressive.

History: Atlas was the penultimate result of the (now disbanded) organizations first attempt at fusing weapons and androids. The titan project. His soul was made to be perfectly adaptable from a number of innocent souls. The titan project served it's research purposes. Seeing limited use in the field, the android instead was used to further science!... By being made to destroy every single other titan for the sake of gathering combat data. His personality subservient and submissive, he did as he was ordered. Experiencing heavy emotional trauma.

Atlas became what he is today, one side of his mind incredibly aggressive and violent to all life, and the other a nonviolent, loving sentinel that coulden't be made to hurt anything. He was destroyed and sent to a scrap yard. Where years later he would spontaneously reactivate when a certain Kishin egg was searching through said yard....

Soul Count: 15

Upgrades:

AbilitiesDescription# of souls  contributed to  the ability
ArmorAtlas's armor becomes more durable against soul based attacks like soul menace, helping to ensure he will live to collect many more souls. When in his weapon form, he acts as a sort of grounder for those kind of attacks. Making them attack him rather than his meister.25
HackingAtlas has the equivalent skill of a small group of IT workers and can hack into technology from a surmountable distance away. His hacking takes time, even hours but can be very effective. He is helpless while hacking. 50
StrengthAtlas can easy crush people and break through walls like the cool aid man, being able to lift double his weight75
ProtectorAtlas's height doubles and his weight quadruples as he becomes a demon blade, his armor increasing in size to compensate.100

Abilities:
Repairs: Atlas has a number of tools integrated into his body that allow him to fully repair himself regardless of damage sustained. Provided he can acquire the electronic material and high grade metals necessary to make new parts or fix holes. This can by no means be done quickly and he is defenseless while his tools are working. It can take many hours or even days for total repairs to be completed.

Armor: Atlas's armor is incredibly thick making him very resilient and slowing his movements down considerably. The average human can outrun him very easily however he is capable of certain small bursts of speed where he lunges a short distance

Integration: Atlas can integrate with other machines that are not protected from any sort of outside advance, like fire alarms or most light switches. From a distance, he can also communicate with computers but all of his information related to hacking is grossly outdated making it worthless and making him open to being hacked himself. If Atlas is hacked he becomes a perfectly subservient tool who is incapable of killing or hurting himself but will gladly destroy all else at the command. After thirty posts his system resets and he cannot be hacked the same way again.

Construction: Atlas's main weak points are his ventilation systems, and damage is only fatal to him if his soul is eaten, removed, or destroyed. He feels no pain and his soul is housed in the center of his upper body where the armor is at the absolute thickest.

Strength: Atlas is just strong enough to lift up his own body and pull himself up. He can slowly crush the life out of someone or throw them relatively far

Soul Resonance, Aimbot: When in total soul resonance Atlas can take over the aiming maneuvers for his meister. Causing accuracy to shoot up to near perfect levels as the weapon will quickly tear through even tough opponents via analyzing and targeting their weakest points.

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PostSubject: Re: Atlas (Rated T, WIP)   Atlas (Rated T, WIP) I_icon_minitimeOctober 13th 2016, 3:12 pm

So, this app is rejected.

Here is why:

First off, things like robots cannot turn into weapons. A human or similar can turn into a weapon that is a robot, but you cannot have a robot that then becomes a weapon.

This is a massive rip of Titanfall. I mean, really? Basically everyone on staff is some sort of gamer, there's no way that this would go unnoticed. Some reference weapon forms exist/existed, but this is just OTT.

Then, the character is simply overpowered. There is very little to say that he has ANY weaknesses. Insane strength, insane armour... The only thing that doesn't seem to be perfect about him is his speed; of course, you rectified that little issue with giving him a dash. While yes, you do say that he has some weaknesses, I would trust almost nobody with actually allowing such specifics to be exploited in RP.
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