new weapon domic

Name domic

Gender/Sex: male

Age: 17


Meister: NA

Weapon Form: Domic is a short blade long handle katana his handle is wraped with black lace and the hilt is solid gold with imprints of dragons on it . His blade if you look in his blade for too long you start to experience madness.  

Love Interest: NA

Orientation (Sexual/Romantic): heterosexual

Appearance: domic is vary skinny and stand at about 6 4". His hair is usually vary long and is char Cole black. He usually wears old hoodies and jeans. His pupils  are a light shade of green that make him look vary sinister.  

personality: Domic is a vary sarcastic, at times hilarious, and extremely clumsy. But he sadly makes poor life choices. He has trouble making new friends so he is mostly a loner. He spends most of  time in his a apartment writing poetry and playing video games.            

History: Domic grew up on the back streets of New York. He was a dumpster baby thrown out by his mother who he still knows little about. he was picked up and brought to a christian orphanage. Where Domic spent most of his time an outcast. The few thing that would keep him going where his one friend Jess, card games. One day when Domic and Jess was walking around New York when a gang attacked. As domic's instincts kicked in he then transformed into a katana then Jess used him to fight off the gang members. One day Domic  was going to leave the orphanage to insole in the DWMA.

Soul Count: 0

Miscellaneous: one day as he was walking the streets of death city he came across a husky German shepherd mix named Klondike and is his trusted companion that is externally protective.    

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First off, this was posted in the wrong section. I'll move it for you, but please watch what section you post it in next time.

Second off, there are a bunch of issues with this app. Capitalization, correct grammar, and spelling are all important in an app, not to mention your sections are all too short. Try to aim for close to 100 words for personality/history/appearance, and as close as you can get on the weapon description.

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