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PostSubject: Alexander (On Hold)   Alexander (On Hold) I_icon_minitimeJune 5th 2015, 8:44 pm

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Name:
Alexander

Gender/Sex:
Male.

Age:
23
Appearance:
Alexander stands five feet ten inches tall. His hair is a shiny black color and stops just before it hits his shoulders. When performing less than legal business he dons a masquerade mask, along with a long black jacket fitted with a bulletproof vest and tactical pockets. Otherwise he wears a black coat with a white undershirt and a nice set of dress shoes. He is quite good looking, Alexander stands five feet ten inches tall and weighs 160 pounds. He wears glasses during the day despite the fact that when he is out fighting at night he usually goes without them for some reason. He wears a size ten shoe and while he keeps his hair well maintained during the day at the night he wears it messy. In the dark his eyes glow yellow. hiding their normal color.
Personality
Alexander is very intelligent, while also being quick to anger and very bold. His head is filled with hatred, anger, and above all a need to fight. To try and stop the spread of evil from all sources of man. Kishin egg or not. He can be friendly when he wants to be and very persuasive, even manipulative at times. He loves his friend Robin like a younger brother and is fiercely protective of him. At night, when he is out fighting against other Kishen eggs and monsters of a more human variety he feels like he is a different person. Different from the kind demeanor he puts up around himself during the day. He is more merciless and through either his Kishen egg ability's or his own delusion he does not wear his glasses at night.

History:
Alexander was a delinquent. He showed up to school when he felt like it, he quit whatever job he did not like, and he was a huge pain in the ass to his parents. He never made any good friends, a couple of them tricked him into opening a coffee shop a while back. He sunk in all his money and the other two took off when they did not make a profit for over a month. Then one day, a Kishen egg had to go and kill everyone that he had ever even loved. his sister, his two little brothers, his mom, and oh hell. Even his deadbeat dad! That creature ripped them apart like they were chew toys on a camping trip when he was eighteen. After somehow killing the thing with a butterfly knife he kept in his boot he sat there in the pool of his family’s blood laughing his ass off in a fit of madness.

With his luck, he just knew that he was going to get stuck with murdering them all. To top it all off, his dads soul was missing somewhere in the pile carnage. It looked like that Kishin egg had made him his lunch. It couldn't be that bad to be a monster could it? He took the souls of his family and gobbled them right up. If people were going to think he was a monster than he would be a monster. He even got a taste for them and tried the Kishins soul as well. It was a much better taste for him he decided.

So he made his way to the nearest city with what supplies he could carry and he just made it in at the end of the week with four dollars and a granola bar in his pocket. He saw a boy who looked much hungrier than he did and just as he was opening up his snack to eat it he instead sat next to him and offered him the snack. The two hit it off big and before he knew it he had an outcast of his own that he wanted to take care of.

The two moved city to city, looking for a better place to live. All the while the boy named Robin was constantly under attack by Kishen, he found out that he was a Sorcerer and that the damn things seemed to be attracted to him. Finally they ended up in death city, where the coffee shop he had invested so heavily in resided. Survival was no longer a problem.

He made Robin go back to school but he shared an idea with him. The idea of becoming vigilantes and making the world a cleaner place of all the Kishen monsters and deadbeats alike. He made the two of them costumes to this effect, looked around until he found someone who could sell him weapons, then finally made his own mask to hide his identity. All that was left was to go out and look for trouble after dark, and boy he was good at finding trouble.

Abilities:
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AbilitiesDescription# of souls  contributed to  the ability
RebellionAlexander's revolver, Rebellion. Fires bullets made out of soul wavelength. On contact they explode in a three foot radius. These explosions carry more force than shreading potential, an indirect shot (say to the feet) could stun. While a direct shot could knock someone off their feet. This weapon has a range of thirty meters.20
EnduranceAlexanders body is not as easily fatigued. He is capable of running marathons with relative comfort and can strike repeatedly without getting winded.35
SpeedAlexander can move than a normal man. He can catch arrows, his fists alone make the air sing, and he can run about as fast as an elk. However doing this for longer than a city block cracks down on even his stamina. He can easily react within a split second and he can draw weapons with the speed of master gunslingers.
50
Empowered attacksAlexander's melee attacks with his body and his gun can be empowered by his soul wavelength to the point that he can crack concrete. This ability also makes the attacking limb in question stronger so that it will not break or be cut by a demon weapon on contact. Generally, it must be used to either knock his opponent off his guard or finish a fight. Because he can only call on this ability five times in one fight.
80
Rebellion +Alexander's pistols are conduits of hatred and violence. Melee attacks with it gain the benefit of empowered attacks without any cost to how many times it can be used.100
You can't hit meThree times a thread Alexander can push his body past his normal limits. Every time he activates this ability it lasts for one post, his speed almost doubles allowing him to dodge bullets and dash very fast in short bursts. 120
Rebellion ++The projectiles from Rebellion now have a weakening effect. In how all material (organic or inorganic) is weakened when it is shot. It makes metal much more brittle and living tissue much more soft. By firing upon a fire hydrant and using an empowered attack, he could kick it off of the ground. 140
Endurance +Alexander can take a beating, his bones are twice as strong and his body is much harder to bruise. It would take the punches of a boxer instead of a normal man to inflict the same punishment. He is also more resistant to blunt force in general.Being thrown into concrete hard enough to crack it would still overwhelmingly hurt, but it would not break anything.160
Die already!Alexander charges forward and hits his enemy with a barrage of punches and kicks so intense that it literally explodes at the end. The force capable of knocking people high into the air. The entire flurry takes three seconds. One use of empowered attack can be used once to make every strike in the flurry empowered.180
You can't hit me +You can't hit me has been improved so that it may be used six times a thread.200
JudgmentAlexander can target one opponent per thread by looking into their eyes for ten seconds. If he does so, then for the rest of the thread he can sense every action that their body takes. (Including extensions of their body, like black blood or similar abilities) Allowing him to dodge preemptively or potentially even while blinded. This technique only works against other Kishin egg's or those who possess madness wavelengths. One can tell that they are being effected by this ability by the feeling of being watched so intensely it causes the hair to stand up on their neck. Over the course of a fight, keeping this ability active can make him exhausted. However it requires little focus.220
Speed +Alexander is capable of moving faster than the eye can track, if only for short dashes.240
Empowered madnessAlexanders madness wavelength is so vicious it effects even wavelengths normally protected against it as if they were not. Those possessing madness wavlengths and anti madness wavelength, take damage from rebelion and Ice cold killer normally. 260
Empowered attacks +Empowered attack can be used ten times per thread.280
Rebellion +++Alexander's ranged attacks with Rebellion explode in a range of five feet and can remove limbs from those directly cought in the blast. When this mode of fire is used it carries almost five times the recoil and cannot be used in rapid succession.300
Endurance ++Alexander can use even strenuous abilities like Die already and you judgment with very little toll to his stamina.320



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Have you read the rules:
"Come with me... Overwhelming power... And Madness... Awaits."


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PostSubject: Re: Alexander (On Hold)   Alexander (On Hold) I_icon_minitimeJune 10th 2015, 12:57 pm

Appearance and Personality are to short. They must be 100 words or more.
As well please reduce the radius of the explosion slightly 30ft is a little to big.
3 im not sure about that pistol unless its an actual Weapon
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PostSubject: Re: Alexander (On Hold)   Alexander (On Hold) I_icon_minitimeJune 10th 2015, 1:29 pm

I suppose their is nothing technically wrong with this...
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PostSubject: Re: Alexander (On Hold)   Alexander (On Hold) I_icon_minitimeJune 14th 2015, 5:16 pm

Alright, here is a list of every soul that Alexander has obtained.

He has gained in total 162 souls.

20 starting souls

13 in this topic: https://souleaterrp.forumotion.com/t4367-nothing-but-kishin-eggs-and-monsters-out-there-m-for-mature-open

4 in this topic: https://souleaterrp.forumotion.com/t4442p75-slavery-is-bad-open-mature?nid=2#119963

13 in this topic: https://souleaterrp.forumotion.com/t4422-hero-s-duty-open-to-all

7 in this topic: https://souleaterrp.forumotion.com/t4411-another-joins-the-ranks-of-the-free-pg-13-open

15 in this topic: https://souleaterrp.forumotion.com/t4406-weed-killers-pg-13-open

20 in this topic: https://souleaterrp.forumotion.com/t4437p15-sacrificial-church-open-m-for-mature-a-bit-of-gore-in-the-begging?nid=1#119091

30 in this topic: https://souleaterrp.forumotion.com/t4499-the-mob-s-still-kicking-but-not-for-long-open

40 in this topic: https://souleaterrp.forumotion.com/t4588-let-s-kill-hitler

9 from this topic: https://souleaterrp.forumotion.com/t4285-a-mission-with-supervision-private-jac-me

5 souls in this topic: https://souleaterrp.forumotion.com/t4276-a-night-on-the-town-private

15 souls in this topic: https://souleaterrp.forumotion.com/t4286-is-this-a-bad-place-to-be-or-jac-and-i#116907

31 souls in this topic: https://souleaterrp.forumotion.com/t4292-this-party-is-on-fire-me-and-greyhearth-m-for-mature

35 Souls in this topic: https://souleaterrp.forumotion.com/t4298-this-bar-is-hot-private-m-for-mature


He has gained 5 from Robin Orel: https://souleaterrp.forumotion.com/t4242-robin-orel
Three he gained in this thread: https://souleaterrp.forumotion.com/t4259-whenever-somone-wants-a-change-the-world-pushes-back-t-private
And 2 from this thread: https://souleaterrp.forumotion.com/t4249-the-incident-open-for-all-t-for-teen


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PostSubject: Re: Alexander (On Hold)   Alexander (On Hold) I_icon_minitimeJune 17th 2015, 12:06 pm

Right, so, going to have someone else step in for the other things, but, first off, getting souls via private threads is a no-no, for what SHOULD be obvious reasons.

As such, I'm going to have to revoke all souls gained in said threads.
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PostSubject: Re: Alexander (On Hold)   Alexander (On Hold) I_icon_minitimeJuly 15th 2015, 3:53 am

Is it just me- or does Alex power also have to be questioned here? Not just how many souls he got withen a short time.
Even at Kishin lv that a mighty lot of -cough cough- op -cough cough-
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PostSubject: Re: Alexander (On Hold)   Alexander (On Hold) I_icon_minitimeJuly 15th 2015, 10:08 am

these were not the powers he had when I looked it over
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PostSubject: Re: Alexander (On Hold)   Alexander (On Hold) I_icon_minitimeAugust 1st 2015, 10:28 pm

Okay, so, in order

-Healing factor is OP, pls nerf

-Soul Wave is right out

-'Hot as a star' is way, way too hot.
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PostSubject: Re: Alexander (On Hold)   Alexander (On Hold) I_icon_minitimeAugust 16th 2015, 1:51 am

I can reaccept this now.

Reaccepted.
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PostSubject: Re: Alexander (On Hold)   Alexander (On Hold) I_icon_minitimeNovember 7th 2015, 12:46 pm

Character placed on hold by administrative authority.
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PostSubject: Re: Alexander (On Hold)   Alexander (On Hold) I_icon_minitimeNovember 14th 2015, 3:34 pm

Okay, so, reviewing the abilities, there isn't a single one that doesn't need nerfing.

Beyond which, you seem to have added another OP ability when no one was looking, namely the pyrokinesis ability. 1000 degrees isn't okay.

Since we've had problems with this character multiple times, we the staff have decided to reject this character for reapproval.

Further, due to repeated instances of the staff having to step in and resolved issues caused by you, we've decided to increase the severity of your probation. As of now, you are now only allowed to use normal meisters and normal weapons. You may not roleplay with Kishin Eggs, Death Scythes, Monsters, Demon Weapons, Clowns, Witches, and Monsters.

In six months time, you may request we rereview both the restriction and appeal it's removal.

Jac, stuff like this can't keep happening. You are on your last and final chance. If you make another OP character or try pushing the line again, you WILL recieve a permaban.
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