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Vixy McCloud Seasoned Member
Posts : 8286 Join date : 2013-07-11 Age : 24
| Subject: BLACK FOX BANDITS FIRST APPEARANCE: REDO July 12th 2013, 10:19 pm | |
| Hey every one ace has given me permission To redo the black fox bandits first appearance Because me first impression was poor And I didnt get to introduce my other characters So PLEAE pretend the other ones I made (The secret fox cave and the black fox bandits First appearance original) didn't happen ok? Pretend I'm new agin I'll try my best not to run away a lot ok Love blackfoxbandits
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Vixy McCloud Seasoned Member
Posts : 8286 Join date : 2013-07-11 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: BLACK FOX BANDITS FIRST APPEARANCE: REDO July 12th 2013, 10:26 pm | |
| An old man is sweeping in his candy shop when the lights Go out then he hears giggling "w-who's there?" He said as He dropped his broom he heard a swooshing noise the his Lights came back on and all his inventory was gone
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Vixy McCloud Seasoned Member
Posts : 8286 Join date : 2013-07-11 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: BLACK FOX BANDITS FIRST APPEARANCE: REDO July 12th 2013, 10:27 pm | |
| On the roof top two children were standing with a Giant sack of candy the giggled agin as the ran away Dashing on the roof tops |
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Vixy McCloud Seasoned Member
Posts : 8286 Join date : 2013-07-11 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: BLACK FOX BANDITS FIRST APPEARANCE: REDO July 12th 2013, 10:33 pm | |
| The children stop on a roof to eat their Stolen treat "that was fun Ida" says the boy I giggle and say "it was Kiro I haven't had sweets in AGES!" Kiro takes a cinnamon gumdrop out the bag and eats it I sigh "I just hope no one catches us" Kiro laughs And says "please all we did was steal some candy Not steal some souls people are more worried about Witches and kishins." I nod "yeah your right" |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: BLACK FOX BANDITS FIRST APPEARANCE: REDO July 12th 2013, 11:23 pm | |
| Kataro and Kasharu jump on the same roof the thieves were on. "You guys should do better at making your thieving unnoticeable." |
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| Subject: Re: BLACK FOX BANDITS FIRST APPEARANCE: REDO July 12th 2013, 11:25 pm | |
| Jet sneak past Kataro and Kaharu carring a bag filled with dollars |
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Vixy McCloud Seasoned Member
Posts : 8286 Join date : 2013-07-11 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: BLACK FOX BANDITS FIRST APPEARANCE: REDO July 12th 2013, 11:36 pm | |
| Me and kiro's faces: o_o "um who are you?" Kiro says half confused And half annoyed |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: BLACK FOX BANDITS FIRST APPEARANCE: REDO July 12th 2013, 11:47 pm | |
| "You too jet. Why are you stealing again?" |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: BLACK FOX BANDITS FIRST APPEARANCE: REDO July 12th 2013, 11:48 pm | |
| "Im Kataro, and this is my brother Kasharu. And you two are thieves." |
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Vixy McCloud Seasoned Member
Posts : 8286 Join date : 2013-07-11 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: BLACK FOX BANDITS FIRST APPEARANCE: REDO July 12th 2013, 11:53 pm | |
| Kiro shrugs "so what??? It's just candy" he puts a piece of gum in his mouth And blows a bubble then It pops I giggle |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: BLACK FOX BANDITS FIRST APPEARANCE: REDO July 12th 2013, 11:55 pm | |
| "if its just candy, you shouldn't mind if I took a bunch from you. Should you?" |
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Vixy McCloud Seasoned Member
Posts : 8286 Join date : 2013-07-11 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: BLACK FOX BANDITS FIRST APPEARANCE: REDO July 13th 2013, 12:17 am | |
| Kiro narrows his eyes and growls "lay one finger on it and I'll bite your freaking hand off got it!" I chuckle a bit Classic Kiro I thought
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: BLACK FOX BANDITS FIRST APPEARANCE: REDO July 13th 2013, 12:20 am | |
| Kataro turns his arm into a cannon. "I think biting my hand off won't be so easy." |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: BLACK FOX BANDITS FIRST APPEARANCE: REDO July 13th 2013, 12:21 am | |
| Jet chuckles behind Kataro and says "Kid I don't recommend it. And Kataro you know me so well." Jet tosses the bag of money down off the roof |
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Vixy McCloud Seasoned Member
Posts : 8286 Join date : 2013-07-11 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: BLACK FOX BANDITS FIRST APPEARANCE: REDO July 13th 2013, 12:27 am | |
| Me and kiro's eye got huge then Kiro scoffed "your one of those DMWA kids huh? Aren't you above Picking on children?" I shake my head and say "tsk tsk tsk for shame"
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: BLACK FOX BANDITS FIRST APPEARANCE: REDO July 13th 2013, 12:30 am | |
| "Uummm, whatever. And it's actually DWMA not every letter of the alphabet. Just Give me the candy, and I won't blow your brains all over this rooftop." |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: BLACK FOX BANDITS FIRST APPEARANCE: REDO July 13th 2013, 12:31 am | |
| Jet puts his hand on Kataros shoulder "Dude let them go." |
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Vixy McCloud Seasoned Member
Posts : 8286 Join date : 2013-07-11 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: BLACK FOX BANDITS FIRST APPEARANCE: REDO July 13th 2013, 12:32 am | |
| I put on a poker face " your gonna kill us over candy? What would Death Think when he figures out you killed some innocent children?" |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: BLACK FOX BANDITS FIRST APPEARANCE: REDO July 13th 2013, 12:33 am | |
| "You're right jet. Beating up a few little babies that are reduced to stealing candy, is not something I want on my reputation. |
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Vixy McCloud Seasoned Member
Posts : 8286 Join date : 2013-07-11 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: BLACK FOX BANDITS FIRST APPEARANCE: REDO July 13th 2013, 12:35 am | |
| Kiro growled " just because we're younger than you doesn't mean We can't kick your azz" |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: BLACK FOX BANDITS FIRST APPEARANCE: REDO July 13th 2013, 12:38 am | |
| Jet yells actually quite angry "What did you just say?!?!? I could easily whop your ass midget! |
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Vixy McCloud Seasoned Member
Posts : 8286 Join date : 2013-07-11 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: BLACK FOX BANDITS FIRST APPEARANCE: REDO July 13th 2013, 12:40 am | |
| Kiro snickers "the only reason I'm short is because I'm young What's YOUR excuse" I giggle a bit trying not to bust Out laughing |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: BLACK FOX BANDITS FIRST APPEARANCE: REDO July 13th 2013, 12:40 am | |
| "We're trained to beat up little bitches like you two. Just get lost before we decide to teach you a lesson." |
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| Subject: Re: BLACK FOX BANDITS FIRST APPEARANCE: REDO July 13th 2013, 12:41 am | |
| Droon has already snuck a massive handful of candy out of the bag while they argued. He sits several yards off watching them yell with a smile as he munches on choclate. |
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Vixy McCloud Seasoned Member
Posts : 8286 Join date : 2013-07-11 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: BLACK FOX BANDITS FIRST APPEARANCE: REDO July 13th 2013, 12:43 am | |
| Kiro's whiskers twitch as he snickers agin "Ya mad? I got plenty more insults where that came from pal How about you leave us alone it's not like we're hurting anything (Besides your ego)" |
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